New track, feedback much appreciated

[rob_ska]

Unfinshed and unmastered so its a bit rough but if anyone could give this a listen i'd appreciate it. Any feedback would be really helpful.

Cheers

http://soundcloud.com/rob_ska/bleak-unf ... unmastered

[sinehere]

Ain't half bad mate, nice tune, alot better than most of the shit that gets posted here.

Like the dubby delay melody, and the sub fits it well, i reckon you should put more of the voice in to fill the gaps, and have it a bit louder, make more of a feature of it, also i think it could do with just some more things in it, its a bit bare at the mo, maybe a dubby guitar might suit it or something. I can't really help you much more than that as I don't make this kinda stuff. Keep at it none the less

[rob_ska]

Cheers for the feedback mate, its not finished yet so wasn't expecting much but thats really helpful, have you got any tracks you want feedback on up at the moment? Let me know and i'll definitely give them a listen.