FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

[dj.c.jay]

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This is really smooth and nice - Could do with a bit more bass or bit of a wobble

[dj.c.jay]

I didnt exactly finish these in august - but have only just decided to Put these up on here see what you guys think

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That one was a saved file in Reason that I started AAAGGGEEESSS ago - thats why it might sound a bit old school

This next one is a collaboration with a good friend Pete (Aka Shotta) - a DJ more than producer but he has got some WICKED ideas in his head! just needed me to lay em down rlli

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Not sure if the "UK" vocals were a Good idea :-/

Any Feedback welcome..... Ill post some when I go through some later today

Cheers in advance - C.Jay

[amphibian]

@creeptown friggin' awesomely heavy man. Can't comment much on the sound itself as I don't have good monitors/headphones atm but really like what you've done

@dj.c.jay nice man, do you come from a house background by any chance? Very progressive house vibe there

[Miniature]

@dj.c.jay, Hey dude, dont know if it was just me but the Hey yeah track sounded a lot more interesting than the one you had colaborated on, can't listen to them both properly because im on laptop speakers but there are some really great ideas down, i like how you have really filled the audio spectrum and also have a nice rythm flowing through the song. maybe throw in a few little crazy FX into the Hey yeah track. appart from that it's sounding pretty cool would love a 320 of the hey yeah track!

@creeptown, pretty much said it yourself dude, the track structure is great just WAAAAY too distorted, just need to get some compression into the mix, maybe run the whole final mix through a multi compressor to boost the overall gain but not distort the track. Cool track though, me likey da filth!

@Basics A, Love the piano at the start of the track, great atmospheric build up. love the effects used throught the track, the stuttered acoustic and hi-hat rolls, really keep the whole track flowing. It gets really deep at about 2mins in, i think in this section you really need to sweep the filter that keeps coming in and out through the stereo field and create some really eerie atmosphere. Great production quality on the track though. will have to siv through the rest of your tracks on soundcloud.

@LordBid, Just thankyou dude, your words were so kind and has pushed me to make some more Dub tracks in this style, A lot of my friends are D&B freaks so when i was making it it just got boosted to 160bpm which actually made the overall track sound so much better. And drums are my speciality, can't have a track without decent sounding drums (That would be like a sin, seeing as i am a drummer lol)
Your track is also pretty darn mad, very fresh take on the deeper dubstep vibes, Very psychedelic influences in this track, i can imagine if you get the levels sorted and maybe tighten up that snare a bit and give the kick a bit more click i can see this going down quite well in a rave in the woods somewhere!


Now this track is not NEW from me but i have only just signed up to this forum so no one on here has heard it, Baisically its a track i Wrote the day i got my new Midi controller and threw it all together in a couple of days. Baisically i would just love people's thoughts as most people who have heard it say its one of the best tracks ive done so far but i hate listening to it because the automation is messy as hell!! Baisically if i get some good feedback ill probably go back and give this song a new coat of paint sorta thing!
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PLUR! X

[reignstep]

- Miniature : first thing that took my attention: your drums. damn good! Fat kick & snare. Im unsure about the bass that follows (after the drop, the high wobbly one) automation on it doesn't seem to be clean. I think mess around with abit more, cause your bass/pad underneath goes well with it, gives it a creepy tone. My advice: sort that out and it's real nice man!

- Dj.c.jay : Drop shot : I like it, nice atmosphere. I'd layer your wobbly sub with a deep deep fat wobble (square/sine). Not really diggin the twist around 1.40 , what you had going was really wicked actually if you layer it with a wobble i discribed. Overall good but imo could have some more improvement

Hey yeah : Very nice, imo the reggaeish stabs are bit too agressive, and would really good well with that fat reese if they were abit smoother. Overall very nice man , liking alot

- kaiori: what i'm used man, love it. Who does the vocals or where'd you get them? Perfect match


Another remix I did, seems i'm producing at lightspeed:

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feedback plis

[vdbproductions]

yooo, got a new tune,
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what you guys think?
grtz from belgium

[amphibian]

yooo, got a new tune,
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what you guys think?
grtz from belgium

@vdb - did you start with the intro in creating the track? I love the intro but feel like the track lost momentum at the first drop. Otherwise I love the production quality and I think all the synths work exceptionally well together!

[Miniature]

@VDB, Pretty much what Amphibian said, good start but i feel like the song started on what shouldve been the drop after more of a 'build up' inro, get all the sections you have and have a play arround with them, i think there deffinatley needs to be a bit more of a build up before the main rythm of the song starts. and work on those drums a bit it all sounds a bit too hollow and that snare isnt really cutting through the mix like it should be.

[kievccs]

Hi again

Here's an old one i hope you guys tell me wheter if it's good or wrong cause i'm thinking ditching this off of my soundcloud lack of space issues.
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I think it's available for download so if you liked it go ahead and grab it

CHeers!

[TheBreadMan]

@kievccs:Very very dope. I just rolled up a spliff and this was perfect to go with it. Downloaded it, and starting follow yo a$$...

@VdBProductions:love that chicago-bull track. I agree with amphibian, but not as much liked it a lot though. Very clean production for the most part. Maybe Beefin the sound up a little though. So it REALLY grabs ahold of yer head and makes it nod...

@reignz:dude your shit never fails to be dirty as all hell...there is a sound in there that kinda reminds me of Darude's Sandstorm or like that track they play in the first part of blade when their at the blodd clube. Maybe if you made that sound a little more dark i think it would probably make it a little more evil...

[kievccs]

Thanks for the feedback Breadman! I'll leave it on soundcloud for free download then

[Gombles]

first 2 tracks 'finished' dunno if they're completely done(what track ever is i spose) but i thought id post um up to see what you guys think.

First one is probably the best peice, "clever use of samples" apparently haha

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This ones only recently finished and i like it, but i feel it needs 'more' let me know what ya think

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cheers y'all !

[relaxuj]

some of my production fellas
http://www.soundclick.com/uhrineves_records
feel free to listen, comment, buy )

[CollisionCourse]

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[Gombles]

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love the rhythm of the song mate, flows proper nice sounds almost grimey in the first like 'chorus'

probably needs some more progression like a new completely different part to it, i didn't get bored as such but kept wanting something else to kick in to sort of bring the track to its peak. nice feel to it though mate really like it

[dubplateguy]

@Gombles- Liking the deep bass and rasta feel! The horns sound a little bit loud (Not painful or anything) but have a real cool sounding rythem to them. Dope drop man, those are some sick synths your using, they also mix real nicely with the horn noises creating a nice atmosphere. Good song all round man sounds kind of like a Joker tune. Digging it for real man big up.

@Collision Course- I dig the intro, Its cool to hear all the different sounds come together. Great synth work before the drop, very trippy. Good deep bass in the drop, loving the rumble for sure, it really compliments the synth lead! This song has good flow from start to finish, and is produced very well, nice work dude.

@ KieVccs- Dope ambience to begin with, sends off some super chill vibes, liking the little percussion noises and swells, especially the shaker. Sick drop as well, pulls the listener in fucks there mind, good smoking music right here for sure. Overall it has an excellent mixdown and is defiantly one of the sicker chill out dub songs I have heard, Nice work bro.

[dubplateguy]

Bangin new track, feedback is much appreciated thanks guys!

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[reignstep]

- Dubplateguy: The drums need some more work, they're kinda getting soaked by your bassline. The bass is nice, maybe some fattening up with some effects (notch filter?) i liked the 8 bit sound, gave it abit a surreal feeling.

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Latest work, some feedback wud be great

[pain]

@Gombles: new politcs is badass. samples are awesome. awesome bassline too and some proper wobbles to go with it. Onto new piano idea: overall sounds good, but that melody that starts around 1:10, just aint feeling that patch for some reason. nice deep bass for the main sections of the song. Can't really complain bout much else but that patch since its an unfinished idea.

@Collision Course: That is one trippy track. Like house mixed with dub almost. Love the deep bass for the main sections. Some happy noises that I tend not to gravitate too but they work here. I can see this going down real well in the club.

@dubplateguy: Cool video game type intro, sounds happy to so it surprises the listener when the nastyness begins. Cool wobbles and bass modulations throughout the song. It gets a bit loud around 2:30 when the samples come in, maybe could have been mixed better. Good use of the samples though. My favorite moment is the bass groove at 3:13 and then you add some odd shifts at the end of the groove. Good stuff.

This is my new track I made. Not really a dub type track cept for the wobbling of the bass but I figure I'd post it here anyway. Its intended to be a hiphop beat that will eventually have someone rap on it. Also, this was my first time using ableton.
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[nftfhx]

for some reason, none of the sound cloud players will load on this page?
so my feedback will come as soon as they do, promise!
so this is pretty much my first full track, i'm quite happy with it
listening back, i think the vocals need to go up on the drop
but i'mma go back tomorrow as it's late and fix it

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