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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by jaydot » Mon Aug 16, 2010 2:42 pm

@paravaris: Feeling the synths on that, the talky robotic bass is good and the tinny instrument after the drop also.
Interesting "wave" bass that kicks in about 16 bars after the drop, nice 1.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by jaydot » Mon Aug 16, 2010 2:42 pm

Double post. :roll:
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Saharadubstep » Mon Aug 16, 2010 4:26 pm

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Chilled-out garage attempt, let me know what you think.
i like the melody in this one, really sweet synth sounds, i would expand on this and add some variations in the melody here and there to keep the track interesting, maybe add a few edits in the beats too, i wouldnt file this under garage tho, but who cares about genres in the end :t:
i like the melody as well, what synth did u use? sounds really nice :D
The trancey lead sound is an Ableton preset synth lead. I forget what it's called though. :D
aah! i c, its really nice though! can't work with ableton so i cant do what u did lol
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Galbm » Mon Aug 16, 2010 5:42 pm

New Sounds i worked on, want to get your replys no shit
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Sub Warrior » Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:18 pm

@ Jaydot: Really loving your sound man, maybe pump up the drums a bit more. I can listen to this in my seat AND chill out on this track on a dancefloor, good job.

@ Paravrais: Not really digging the sound of your synth but you did some fine things with it, Bass is proper in the mix. Maybe pump up clap a bit more, but I think that's personal preference.

@ Mjmuk WoW, got a 320 for me man? Totally digging this deep bassy sound!^^

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EDIT: There stands track's not available but the link WORKS!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Capture pt » Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:40 pm

dfaultuzr wrote: @ capture point: really well done deep track, i think its really hard to go for a minimal vibe but this one does it for me, congrats for the messed up synth lead during the breakdown, great track imo
cheers man, appreciate it!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by paravrais » Mon Aug 16, 2010 10:56 pm

Sub Warrior wrote:@ Jaydot: Really loving your sound man, maybe pump up the drums a bit more. I can listen to this in my seat AND chill out on this track on a dancefloor, good job.

@ Paravrais: Not really digging the sound of your synth but you did some fine things with it, Bass is proper in the mix. Maybe pump up clap a bit more, but I think that's personal preference.

@ Mjmuk WoW, got a 320 for me man? Totally digging this deep bassy sound!^^

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Last track that I've finished, I'm not totally satisfied with it so some changes are comming up! :)

EDIT: There stands track's not available but the link WORKS!
Really like the breakdown parts of your tune but the bits with the high synthy lead ting don't really feel like they sit with the rest of the song to me, when it drops into it it feels really unnatural and grates a bit, sorry dude! The guitar is real pretty though.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by dj instigate » Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:27 am

@ jaydot nice idea reckon u could work on the drums a bit the kick seems a bit muddy maybe try layering the snare with a lower one aswell . Decent tho
@sahara sik basses rowdy as maybe sort turn down the basses tho to let the drums breath a bit . sik tho
@sub warrior liking this mix seems clear

Check this out peeps pure dark subbyness :evil:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by grooki » Tue Aug 17, 2010 7:05 am

Lazure wrote:hey guys lemme know what you think! show love and love will be returneeddd :)
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I do like some brostep, and this is in the direction that I like. I liked the variety of sounds in there, and the actual bassline. The drums didn't punch through as nicely as they could I reckon. Track keeps moving nicely and stuff. Very Datsik, which I guess what you were aiming for! Nice little edits in there too, need those. Nice, bro :wink:

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I understand that people love this sort of dubstep, and so in a way maybe I'm not the person to be giving you feedback. THat primary drill sound, and most of the harsh sounds, me no likey. It's just too much, it's like standing next to a construction site... I prefer the wobbly synth, it has a nice texture and can give melodic sounds. Not that tracks need "melody", but anythign is melodic compared to drills and such.
Production wise, I reckon the drums need to punch through a bit more, they are a bit lost back there, I think that would make this track stand up a little more. I also couldn't get much sub coming though, which is important even with so much mid range.
Apart from the drums and bass I would take my comments as a personal taste issue :D


@Wikum: I really like this introduction, and the drums sound very nice, it all sounds very nicely produced. When the bass enters it is somehow a bit flat, maybe that's just soundcloud. I like the extra percs added as the track goes... I think what really makes this track is that arpeggio melody - it's awesome. The break also has great atmoshpere. I reckon if I could hear the bass properly this track could be epic. Nice job!

@ponte_ricky: Nice piano chords there, and the strings and pads sound great. ANd the piano melody that comes in is also very nice. And the vocally sounds that come in later. Very nice! it's a nice piece on its own, but vocals could also fit well.

@Instigate: I like this - this is the kind of midrange sounds I like. Lots of attitude, and the drums are great! And I love the flute melody. I like the sinister edge. Nice incidental sounds too. Great!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by paravrais » Tue Aug 17, 2010 9:31 am

Grooki - I assume it's the tune in your sig you want feedback on? Well I really dig the track, nice atmosphere and bassline. Good mixdown and the whole thing flows real nicely. Only crit I would have is that at parts it does feel a little empty maybe.

DJ instigate - Digging this quite a lot, got a nice vibe to it. Would have liked the background pads etc to be louder in the mix and the main bass to be less midrange, gets nice and 'blobby' around 1 minute in and sounds much better than the start. Good tune.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by grooki » Tue Aug 17, 2010 10:37 am

paravrais wrote:Grooki - I assume it's the tune in your sig you want feedback on? Well I really dig the track, nice atmosphere and bassline. Good mixdown and the whole thing flows real nicely. Only crit I would have is that at parts it does feel a little empty maybe.
Thanks Paravais, that is the track I wanted feedback on - my net failed just before I was going to repost the track. Glad you like it!

For everyone else, please comment on the track in my sig :D

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Saharadubstep » Tue Aug 17, 2010 10:59 am

grooki wrote:
Lazure wrote:hey guys lemme know what you think! show love and love will be returneeddd :)
thanksdsf :wink:

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I do like some brostep, and this is in the direction that I like. I liked the variety of sounds in there, and the actual bassline. The drums didn't punch through as nicely as they could I reckon. Track keeps moving nicely and stuff. Very Datsik, which I guess what you were aiming for! Nice little edits in there too, need those. Nice, bro :wink:

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I understand that people love this sort of dubstep, and so in a way maybe I'm not the person to be giving you feedback. THat primary drill sound, and most of the harsh sounds, me no likey. It's just too much, it's like standing next to a construction site... I prefer the wobbly synth, it has a nice texture and can give melodic sounds. Not that tracks need "melody", but anythign is melodic compared to drills and such.
Production wise, I reckon the drums need to punch through a bit more, they are a bit lost back there, I think that would make this track stand up a little more. I also couldn't get much sub coming though, which is important even with so much mid range.
Apart from the drums and bass I would take my comments as a personal taste issue :D


allright, i just started making dubstep and i know my drums suck haha! but i think it's just what u like to hear!
but still thanks for the feedback! :)






@Wikum: I really like this introduction, and the drums sound very nice, it all sounds very nicely produced. When the bass enters it is somehow a bit flat, maybe that's just soundcloud. I like the extra percs added as the track goes... I think what really makes this track is that arpeggio melody - it's awesome. The break also has great atmoshpere. I reckon if I could hear the bass properly this track could be epic. Nice job!

@ponte_ricky: Nice piano chords there, and the strings and pads sound great. ANd the piano melody that comes in is also very nice. And the vocally sounds that come in later. Very nice! it's a nice piece on its own, but vocals could also fit well.

@Instigate: I like this - this is the kind of midrange sounds I like. Lots of attitude, and the drums are great! And I love the flute melody. I like the sinister edge. Nice incidental sounds too. Great!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Saharadubstep » Tue Aug 17, 2010 11:06 am

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Alright boys, this is my first "finished" track since getting my studio gear going again. let me know whats what!
wow, this is sweet
really like te sounds in it! can i have it? :)






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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by RatRaceProducing » Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:02 pm

@ sahara, course you can have it mate, i believe it is available for download 192kbps at soundlcoud if your after a 320 for a mix then pm me your e-mail address and shes yours.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by JFK » Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:37 pm

Galbm wrote:New Sounds i worked on, want to get your replys no shit
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YOU HAVE STOLEN THESE BASS SOUNDS FROM OTHER PRODUCERS. YOU ARE A FUCKING MUG.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Depone » Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:07 pm

JFK wrote:
Galbm wrote:New Sounds i worked on, want to get your replys no shit
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YOU HAVE STOLEN THESE BASS SOUNDS FROM OTHER PRODUCERS. YOU ARE A FUCKING MUG.
Language mate, but yeah thats not cool cyrax

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Galbm » Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:31 pm

Thats massive + Alchemy and lots of fx..
dont know what to think

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by reignstep » Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:59 pm

Galbm wrote:Thats massive + Alchemy and lots of fx..
dont know what to think
http://www.dubstepforum.com/sampling-ba ... 53454.html

You got busted a long time ago bro, i think all of the ppl here know 100x more about bass creation than you do.


Back on topic:

-ratrace: didn't I already comment on that one ? well again: i liked the bassline but the high range stabs just didn't do it for me ; imo you culd replace them with something else!

-saharadubstep: your bassline is cool but abit too lowpitched/distorted at places, drums could be EQ'd better too cause they're drowning right now

-paravrais : safe for your feedback man, i quite liked the melody so ima keep it ^^, and soon the downloads will be up then you'll be beggin for one muahahaha :twisted: , just kiddin - on your track i liked the buildup intro , drop was gooood man . i was unsure about the bass but i decided now that it's fitting although you could play around with it abit more. Overall good production

- instigate : pretty fuckin sweet man, really enjoyed that one!


Reworked on of my old tracks , will be droppin the full version tomorrow on my weekly show on Filth.FM (lock in!! :lol: )

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