(House production) Where to take my track?

[Capture pt]

Yo,


So i started messing with a few house bits. im kinda feeling this tune the most out of what ive made so far - but im sorta hit a brick wall as to where else I could take this and/or how to make it evolve.

Wondering if anyone would be so kind as to splash some feedback on (some of) the following things

General concept of the track
How to evolve the track
How to turn it into a finished product.
Is it actually any good

Soundcloud


anything welcome...

[james fox]

yeah that was pretty good man, i like the main groove. i wouldn't really say it was a house track as such though, but that doesn't matter. i'd take about 2 minutes off the arrangement, make the drums cut through the mix a bit more, redo the intro and outro, modulate the synths a bit more or change the pattern a little as the track progresses. also it could use a vocal cut / sample.

[Capture pt]

cheers man, appreciate the look in.

all things noted, now i think about it the mix on the drums could be alot better. ill get looking for a vocal, have some ideas as to where i could slice that in!

cheers man!