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- Chris mack
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010
@ people asking for 320's they are available from sound cloud, just click the DL button!
Thanks for the comments and feedback!

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Latest track.
Latest track.
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@TheBreadMan - Was really digging the intro to this but really don't feel the drop :s Feels quite forced and there's not really much going on apart from that growl which just really doesn't grab my attention at all. There are times where it sounds like a hi hat is way too loud as well. so maybe take that down a bit or possibly EQ it differently, just sounds really painful. Sorry dude, intro is good but after the drop I found it really hard to listen to.
@Zonetrooper5 - Wasn't really feeling groove but street corners has quite a nice vibe to it. Like the arpeggio bleepy thing going on, nice sounds too but it gets quite boring after a while, could do with more progression really to keep things interesting.
@Kaiori Breathe - I posted a comment on your soundcloud but thought I would here as well. VERY nice track, really enjoyed the oriental strings and the melodies are just right. Loving everything you make at the moment, you could well be one of my favourite artists!
@Zonetrooper5 - Wasn't really feeling groove but street corners has quite a nice vibe to it. Like the arpeggio bleepy thing going on, nice sounds too but it gets quite boring after a while, could do with more progression really to keep things interesting.
@Kaiori Breathe - I posted a comment on your soundcloud but thought I would here as well. VERY nice track, really enjoyed the oriental strings and the melodies are just right. Loving everything you make at the moment, you could well be one of my favourite artists!
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I snatched that 320 quick time chris mack lol sick tune!!
I finished one this morning, its softer tune remix of olive you not alone.
Its the top one in my sig, have a listen and let me know what your saying!!
!peace!
I finished one this morning, its softer tune remix of olive you not alone.
Its the top one in my sig, have a listen and let me know what your saying!!
!peace!
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Much better than the last one I heard from you man! The drums are tight most definitely, mix down is sounding pretty good but not perfect. Biggest gripe I have with it is that the main wobble for the bass sounds very basic and not that great which makes it really stand out from the rest of the track which is much higher quality. Pretty understandable seeings as your new to dubstep and it's something hard to get just right. I'd try splitting it into high mid and low mid, put more reverb on the high mid section and EQ both parts a bit harder. Add some attack on the amp on the synth too, maybe try different waveforms in it too, triangle and a square at different octaves would sound nice with the track I reckon but it's up to you lol XD Really like the noise that comes in about 2:40, that scratchy weirdness. Overall it's a nice tune, the drums, sub and high pitched synths are all sounding good dude.RatRaceProducing wrote:I snatched that 320 quick time chris mack lol sick tune!!
I finished one this morning, its softer tune remix of olive you not alone.
Its the top one in my sig, have a listen and let me know what your saying!!
!peace!
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@ponte : cool sounds man, not always diggin the electric bassline with the percussion but it's cool when you take one note and you make it delay alot , really liked that part. Maybe do more around that and don't let that bassline mess around too much with you other sounds. I also noticed some goa influenced sounds, which i love myself 
@breadman : try to work on your levels abit more. It's all cool & stuf to just add a snare and a wobble out of nowhere, but it kinda hurt my ears
drop was really disappointing as im hearing a brutal electro.... be creative man ! also your drums were kinda drowning underneath the rest of your tune
@kaiori : very nice mate , although the eastern violin sequence reminds me alot of Plastician - Japan , abit too much to my liking. Percussion is immense man, loving your snare. Overall very tight production just these violins kinda bother me
Mine's no heavy brostep tune for a chance, some liquid DNB. Uploaded on Newgrounds cause soundcloud won't work with me...
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/356906
Would love some fb

@breadman : try to work on your levels abit more. It's all cool & stuf to just add a snare and a wobble out of nowhere, but it kinda hurt my ears

@kaiori : very nice mate , although the eastern violin sequence reminds me alot of Plastician - Japan , abit too much to my liking. Percussion is immense man, loving your snare. Overall very tight production just these violins kinda bother me

Mine's no heavy brostep tune for a chance, some liquid DNB. Uploaded on Newgrounds cause soundcloud won't work with me...
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/356906
Would love some fb
- kaiori breathe
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010
Just searched it on youtube, but they sound different enough to me :S. His sounds far better than mine lol. I'll slow mine down a bit later and compare the two to make sure for definite - I don't think they're the same, but you never know, thanks for the heads up. Japan actually reminds me of the melody lines from Sadness and Sorrow, a song in Naruto, except in sadness and sorrow it's played on a dizu (i think) and a piano.reignz wrote: @kaiori : very nice mate , although the eastern violin sequence reminds me alot of Plastician - Japan , abit too much to my liking. Percussion is immense man, loving your snare. Overall very tight production just these violins kinda bother me![]()
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Not exacly the same but i think most of the notes are the same. it reminded me ALOT thats all im sayingkaiori breathe wrote:Just searched it on youtube, but they sound different enough to me :S. His sounds far better than mine lol. I'll slow mine down a bit later and compare the two to make sure for definite - I don't think they're the same, but you never know, thanks for the heads up. Japan actually reminds me of the melody lines from Sadness and Sorrow, a song in Naruto, except in sadness and sorrow it's played on a dizu (i think) and a piano.reignz wrote: @kaiori : very nice mate , although the eastern violin sequence reminds me alot of Plastician - Japan , abit too much to my liking. Percussion is immense man, loving your snare. Overall very tight production just these violins kinda bother me![]()

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The melody is totally different, it just sounds similar because they are both the same instrument, that chinese stringed thing I dunno the naame of, fyi plastician didn't write his melody, it's a full sample rip jobby from house of the flying daggers XDreignz wrote:Not exacly the same but i think most of the notes are the same. it reminded me ALOT thats all im sayingkaiori breathe wrote:Just searched it on youtube, but they sound different enough to me :S. His sounds far better than mine lol. I'll slow mine down a bit later and compare the two to make sure for definite - I don't think they're the same, but you never know, thanks for the heads up. Japan actually reminds me of the melody lines from Sadness and Sorrow, a song in Naruto, except in sadness and sorrow it's played on a dizu (i think) and a piano.reignz wrote: @kaiori : very nice mate , although the eastern violin sequence reminds me alot of Plastician - Japan , abit too much to my liking. Percussion is immense man, loving your snare. Overall very tight production just these violins kinda bother me![]()
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Double edit: Listened back and forth and they might be the same samples XD but the melody does sound really different :s
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lots of shit hot stuff reignz, production is sweet and your tunes are v good in general. can i dl most of them???
what are you using to make that percussive bassline sound?
what are you using to make that percussive bassline sound?
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Nah some of the notes are defo the sameparavrais wrote:The melody is totally different, it just sounds similar because they are both the same instrument, that chinese stringed thing I dunno the naame of, fyi plastician didn't write his melody, it's a full sample rip jobby from house of the flying daggers XDreignz wrote:Not exacly the same but i think most of the notes are the same. it reminded me ALOT thats all im sayingkaiori breathe wrote:Just searched it on youtube, but they sound different enough to me :S. His sounds far better than mine lol. I'll slow mine down a bit later and compare the two to make sure for definite - I don't think they're the same, but you never know, thanks for the heads up. Japan actually reminds me of the melody lines from Sadness and Sorrow, a song in Naruto, except in sadness and sorrow it's played on a dizu (i think) and a piano.reignz wrote: @kaiori : very nice mate , although the eastern violin sequence reminds me alot of Plastician - Japan , abit too much to my liking. Percussion is immense man, loving your snare. Overall very tight production just these violins kinda bother me![]()
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Double edit: Listened back and forth and they might be the same samples XD but the melody does sound really different :s

and cheers rat, most is up for download, unless they are pending on a release (most of my newer tunes).
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Yo Reign, really diggin those melodies there mate! Great job!
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have have a ganda mate and see what i can nab free lol
The final version of olive - your not alone (Dr Crunk Remix) In my sig now, let me know boys and gals!
The final version of olive - your not alone (Dr Crunk Remix) In my sig now, let me know boys and gals!
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little bit slow, maybe you were aiming for this though?? nice atmospheric pad, like the drum work as mention above, overall mix is good!Project EX wrote:Like the plucking synth, also not very keen on the bass, it doesn't really fit the tune imo. Might wanna try to switch it up a bit.710 wrote:Sup dudes (and the occasional female)
Thoughts on the song in my sig? It's kind of a slow, lumbering track--but that's what I was going for haha.
Drum work is good, nice variations. Mix is pretty good too.
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1b3Z87ierp0
very new to dubstep, been a doa member for ages (produced dnb, funk house/gayhouse (god forbid)
starting to get an ear for dubstep, wanting to know if im hitting close to home base with this one.
all comments appreciated, praise and extreme negativity welcomed equally
very new to dubstep, been a doa member for ages (produced dnb, funk house/gayhouse (god forbid)
starting to get an ear for dubstep, wanting to know if im hitting close to home base with this one.
all comments appreciated, praise and extreme negativity welcomed equally
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010
really nice percussion work crisp sound, as are the vocal hits, the mix his tight all in all, good workkaiori breathe wrote:Just searched it on youtube, but they sound different enough to me :S. His sounds far better than mine lol. I'll slow mine down a bit later and compare the two to make sure for definite - I don't think they're the same, but you never know, thanks for the heads up. Japan actually reminds me of the melody lines from Sadness and Sorrow, a song in Naruto, except in sadness and sorrow it's played on a dizu (i think) and a piano.reignz wrote: @kaiori : very nice mate , although the eastern violin sequence reminds me alot of Plastician - Japan , abit too much to my liking. Percussion is immense man, loving your snare. Overall very tight production just these violins kinda bother me![]()

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luving this one, great drum work, liking the delayed electric piano as well, mix is greatChris mack wrote:@Paravrais I like intro. Cool noise, but to me the high pitched synth sort of killed it. Just a personal opion. Good work with the drums, although they could be brought slightly foward in the mix.
@Iron ears I love the vibe of the track and was really intrigued at the start. I liked the way you developed it but there seemed to be no immediate pay off interms of the drums. Cool vocal and great vibe.
@Craggle I liked it! Very Joker esqe. Nice work with the synth melody and arpegiation. It all seems to sit very nicely. Good track
Heres my second post on these forums as my first got locked as i didn't know about this thread. Here is my latest choon
A deep dubstep track
CHEERS!
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absolute bliss, mix is clean as a whistle. im not much for minimal music but this touches me in a sweet spot. my balls.JUJU_MAN wrote:luving this one, great drum work, liking the delayed electric piano as well, mix is greatChris mack wrote:@Paravrais I like intro. Cool noise, but to me the high pitched synth sort of killed it. Just a personal opion. Good work with the drums, although they could be brought slightly foward in the mix.
@Iron ears I love the vibe of the track and was really intrigued at the start. I liked the way you developed it but there seemed to be no immediate pay off interms of the drums. Cool vocal and great vibe.
@Craggle I liked it! Very Joker esqe. Nice work with the synth melody and arpegiation. It all seems to sit very nicely. Good track
Heres my second post on these forums as my first got locked as i didn't know about this thread. Here is my latest choon
A deep dubstep track
CHEERS!
Soundcloud
what do you mix with (monitors i mean) chromatic nz?
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010
My new remix, not so wobbly, more like Noisia or something
I think it turned pretty well anyway, produced in Reason 4, bass made with Subtractor with some sidechain on.
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