FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

[reignstep]

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I hope you guys like it. Thanks for listening and please let me know what you think because this is only my 3rd track ever and i'm eager to learn more

I think remixing songs is quite a difficult start to learn how to produce, as you said this is your 3rd track. also you just used the intro of the original pink floyd song and then made your own and put that behind it. I think for your 3rd song ever this is pretty decent , one of your wobbles sounds way too 'raw' though , but drumwise you're already doing a hell of a job for a 3rd song mate. Keep on on producing


Depone, I left you some fb on Soundcloud


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Little repost, realised my tune wasn't mixed down well at all so I redid it

[AL4228]

@ F-R-E-D - for a 3rd track it's not bad, i agree with what reigns said... the synthesis on the track could use some work, it has that reason 4 wobble sound to it. But you def. got a nice ambience goin at breaks, the beat is nice, no sidechain etc... overall good production for a 3rd track, seem to be progressing fast keep it up

[the get down]

Kaza:
I like the hand drums during the intro. Mix is sounding good! that "you the man" sample breakdown sounds really cool but i dont know how well it fits the context of the song (which is set by the first longer vocal sample about death) but whatever the song sounds good.

Jaydot:
nice drop!, bass might be a lil muddy but I'm on cheap headphones right now too
@ 1:21 oh my, filthy stuff doesnt do it for me so much these days but i got to give it up on that one! nice!

Depone:
Like the steppy hats. mix sounds real good. get this one out!

FRED:
your on to a good start there! Careful with the overlapping wobbles, they clash a bit. Try to drop elements out more for some easy variations.

Reignz:
(the song you posted in the thread most recently) bangin drums! Track isnt fully my style but it sounds good. I like the timbre of the bass. I think some of the midrangy synth wob changeup sounds are mixed a bit to high IMO.

Mine:
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[r_byron]

new to the forum. hi everyone! lol got a beat to share, not heard alot of the darker sort of minimal stuff on here but what i have heard has made me really wary bout puttin up stuff cos most of you are really good.

john_neenan:
about a year ago i would have stabbed someone to that beat, nice work bruv, even though ive kinda gone off that sound recently, i defintelety have a soft spot for that beat sick mate great stuff

fassyman:
that ritual dub is sick mate bruv really feelin that, mix down sounds pro too, nice atmosphere percussion is spot on, complete freshness. im gonna show a few of my mates that

depone:
thats mad bruv serious shit right there man good work, same as what i felt with john_neenans tune
http://soundcloud.com/r_byron/new-untitled-26-08-10-1 (CAN SOMEONE PLEASE HELPME I DONT KNOW HOW TO GET THE WIDGET)

[AL4228]

@the get down - likeing the track, could beef your sub up abit more at the drop or give your synth some EQing. those kicks are awsome with that vinyl feel to it, ending ambience = prime

[brex]

@r_byron...Really nice vibes dude! this is the kinda stuff i'm into, mad dark when the bass drops and i like how its nice and laid back.

@F-R-E-D..i like it...its cool how you can make those happy cheerful birds sound eerie in the begining hahah

@reignz...crazy track! good job man...nice job mixing it

heres mine:
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Whatsup everyone, I've been producing for about 2 months, and this is my first track that I've finished completely...I'm looking for any kind of fb good or bad (hopefully not tooo bad haha). I'd really appreciate it if you let me know what you think and what i need to work on. Its a pretty chill ambient track and I'm happy with how it came out

[BadBoyBastian3B]

New Tune Check It Out

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[Njamimars]

NEW CHOON

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[BadBoyBastian3B]

@Njamimars, Love the glitchy sound you have going sounds dope

[fassyman]

fassyman:
that ritual dub is sick mate bruv really feelin that, mix down sounds pro too, nice atmosphere percussion is spot on, complete freshness. im gonna show a few of my mates that

cheers man, gettin released on fentplaes around january time so keep ya ears peeled

[tripwire22]

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ive been working really hard on this one all week so plz let me kno what u think so far

[F-R-E-D]

@ Reignz Thank you.It means a lot to me. I will keep in mind what you said. About your latest track, the woob woob work you did there makes me wanna quit
@AL3228 Thank you sir for appreciations and advices. I love how you built the story in your track. and the drop...WOW
@the get down Thanks man I will do that. Hardcore track you have man. you scared the sht out of me
@Brex thanks a lot dude. there is something really bad in that forrest . I love your track man. chilled me to the bone
@BadBoyBastian I dig the woob woob play
@Njamimars 0:30 woaaaaah!!! I like it man
@fassyman it's like waiting for a samurai execution. i loooove the atmosphere and i just started following you on SC
@tripwire22 Speachless

[tripwire22]

@ Reignz Thank you.It means a lot to me. I will keep in mind what you said. About your latest track, the woob woob work you did there makes me wanna quit
@AL3228 Thank you sir for appreciations and advices. I love how you built the story in your track. and the drop...WOW
@the get down Thanks man I will do that. Hardcore track you have man. you scared the sht out of me
@Brex thanks a lot dude. there is something really bad in that forrest . I love your track man. chilled me to the bone
@BadBoyBastian I dig the woob woob play
@Njamimars 0:30 woaaaaah!!! I like it man
@fassyman it's like waiting for a samurai execution. i loooove the atmosphere and i just started following you on SC
@tripwire22 Speachless

lol speechless was it really that good man?

[streetxlite]

finally got this tune as crunchy as i want it. going to be sending off to master soon (maybe if depone's workload isn't huge right now i'll use him)
anything you think i should change before sending? thanks for all the WIP thread feedback =]
(Wubber stumpper is banging this at Burning Man this weekend, so woot woot!)
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[BadBoyBastian3B]

New Tune Again

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[blazinaidan]

@brex: chill as fuck, good stuff. that guitar sample (and the whole feel of that track) seemed quite dj shadow-esque (which is most def a good thing). really liked the percussion in here. only crit would be that the track doesnt seem to move much anywhere, which again, isn't necessarily bad. its def a chiller, for sure.

@badboybastian3b: this tunes a bit too monotonous for my taste, but that aside your drums sound great and i love that "2-step" vocal sample aha. and how you end it with the vocal echo, i dug that for sure.

@fred: i think a less more high-end, trebly, snappier snare would do this track alot of good. also, i love how you introduce that break but i think how the track comes back into full speed could be done a bit less abruptly. end is real pretty.

posted this up in works-in-progress, but i think its finished now: Soundcloud

[brex]

@brex: chill as fuck, good stuff. that guitar sample (and the whole feel of that track) seemed quite dj shadow-esque (which is most def a good thing). really liked the percussion in here. only crit would be that the track doesnt seem to move much anywhere, which again, isn't necessarily bad. its def a chiller, for sure.

thanks alot man...I actually recorded that guitar part myself and i agree that its not really moving anywhere, thats something I'm gona try to work on in my next track

real nice work on your track too, i love the end where everything gets slowed down haha

[NRHc]

@Tripwire
Love it man,nothing more to say about it,sounds real good!
@blaizinaidan
How love the intro and how the little bongos or something come up and the bass drop after,but the part after from 1:34 to about 2:15 I'm not so sure,dosen't really seem to fit but good track overall!
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streetxlite
Loving it man I love the intro it's sick and the drop too,don't change nothing it sound good like that big up man

Here's a little doodling I made in nano studio but it turned out to be something i quite like I'd like to have some feedback on it!
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[blazinaidan]

thanks alot man...I actually recorded that guitar part myself and i agree that its not really moving anywhere, thats something I'm gona try to work on in my next track

real nice work on your track too, i love the end where everything gets slowed down haha

yea you know, i had a feeling you played it. i dont know why i just had a feeling, i guess cuz it fit with the track so well. i was thinking of putting that last dirty synth on left foot as a guitar instead, or maybe just doing that for live shows. electronic+guitar ftw

[jaydot]

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Remix I made of Kesek aka streetxlite's banger "Throat Saw". As per usual my internet won't buffer the players so I'll leave some feedback on tracks later (as I always do)