First Dubstep Track!! Feedback?

[beavis]

Just made an account with dubstepforum.com today, and soundcloud so i'm new too this.
Check it out though!
I'm an ex FL user, and this is my first track in Reason 4/second dubstep song ever. I dont take this track very seriously because it's not really how i want to sound, i'm just having trouble on getting how i want my dub to sound. Also don't mind the quality i'm no top notch producer, BUT i am planning to attend a college for that soon

Soundcloud

Any feedback is appreciated.

[beavis]

bump

[bizarotrips]

The track didn't sounds too bad for me but you have to
spend some more time on the arrangemen and the
mastering to make it go boom.

[beavis]

The track didn't sounds too bad for me but you have to
spend some more time on the arrangemen and the
mastering to make it go boom.

thanks man i appreciate the feedback.
dont worry though i'll get there one day!