WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for OCTOBER, 2010

[The Phantom Banger]

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Some feedback would be lovely

The drums sound really nice and punchy, build up is great, but i reckon the synth on the drop is too loud and the drop just doesnt have as much energy as the build up. This is just my personal oppinion though!

[The Phantom Banger]

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really feeling this track, the drums are reallly and the little bits of percussion you introduce add alot to the flow of the track! the synth id say is a bit loud but i seem to say that about everything so you should probably ignore me! the chords that come in some really interesting too. Love the whole style of the track and its great that your doing something different!

[reignstep]

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Some feedback would be lovely

The drums sound really nice and punchy, build up is great, but i reckon the synth on the drop is too loud and the drop just doesnt have as much energy as the build up. This is just my personal oppinion though!

Yeah you're probably right, I gotta add subs which is gonna make a huge diff I reckon. I can't really do that for now as I'm stuck on laptop speakers...

Or did you mean the actual sound of the synth, which (imo) did sound okay to me

[The Phantom Banger]

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some feedback on this would be MUCH apprecaited!

[blazinaidan]

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some feedback on this would be MUCH apprecaited!

Mm, potential for sure! I think you gotta get more electronic bassdrum/snare going on for sure. Were you planning on implementing a drop in this later? Cuz it seems like this one wouldn't need a drop at all. Reminds me a tad of Ramadanman (but I don't know his stuff that well tbh). Cool stuff tho, for sure.

[mashmash]

@ The Phantom Banger yeah real interesting ideas here, i'm liking it, you just need some progression into it maybe and a sub
nice starting point though

here's 2 things i've been working on Soundcloud
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[sniperDUBB]

@we bang - tight drop loving the vibe
@tripwire - nice mellow vibe with the nice deep touch, makes me wanna get high and frollock thru the meadows on a nice summers day

heres one im working on, is anyone feeling this so far?
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[ENNO]

@ Phantom banger: Def got something there, hats need to be really shuffly or alot more rhythmic on a tarck like that in my opinion. Maybe a lush synth floating in and out out? but thats probably not the style your going for....?

@mashmash: Like your second track, lot of switch ups. it'll be interesting to hear the final version.

@Sniper dub: Biiiiiigggg!!! not feeling that sine bass youve got going on at the start, I think the track would be better without it...or even fade it in maybe? But other than that, your track is a room filler. Very nice

im sure everyone is sick of those skism remixes....so here another. my attempt feedback is welcome...far from finished if you haven noticed

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[Johnst]

blazinaiden: fucking cool. really fucking cool. it's always interesting to hear dubstep with no wobble, and i liked how straightforward it was. in terms of your bridge, maybe introduce a completely new instrument, like an organ or something?... that may be a bit random, idk. then when it comes back mess with the drums a little and add some funky little drops and such. anyways, really like it, keep working a little bit more on it.

reignz: dude, i need lessons from you in terms of creating intro's, and the wobbles are freaking spot on. interesting, dirty, fat, and varied, just like i like em. i will be following you on soundcloud, and good luck with the competition.

Tripwire: well done on the drums, they sound tight, and i like how they sort of sound like they're being played in a small room, if that makes any sense. the bass is big but unobtrusive, and just adds to the fullness of the sound. i also like the pads and piano work, very nice, subtle touches. well done!

Alright, so i made it louder and added on some more stuff. again, whatever you can tell me about the drums, bass, and sub would really help!
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[zuta]

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Almost finish , any feedback is welcome

[projekt]

I've started experimenting with garage and 2-step recently. Been listening to alot of future garage/post dubstep. Knocked this rough track up in a couple of hours tonight, so different to any of the music i have been making. Would appreciate it if i could get some feedback on it, constructive would be nice. I will post a few comments with feedback to the tunes on here on people's soundclouds as i prefer doing it that way.

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[sniperDUBB]

thanks for ur comment enno ill definately do something with the start i agree with u...

[CBK81]

Olux - I really like the snare and the percs in general. Nice over all flow you got
CenturySam - The strange thing is how the sub drops out when the beat hits in. Some phase issues there or something. Not too bad of a track imo.
frogman - Holy shit that riser and the way it went into the drop was crazy. Clean up the sounds and you got a winner.
carsonac - Nice vibes. I wish the snare was a bit more crispy. Good stuff
oooh - not sure what to say about this one. I didn't feel anything about it to be honest. The music and instrumentation were both lacking imo. Noticed there are two tunes and they both sound the same.
wabble - This is a creepy ass tune. That snare smacks you in the face!
JayZest - Really quality production here. Feelin it.
kikaruu - Nice work, I would say a bit of a stronger sense of the groove would make it better. It's a bit jazzy with the rhythms.
streetxlite - I love the sound of your wubz. Nice stuff as always.
Quasy - Sorry, I didn't feel this one at all.
Steeple - That shit is rompin!
oscarhenson - Not into the bowser one as much I would think I would be. The other tune is quality tho. Nice triplets with the drums and the vocals are top shelf.
Neff - Your wubs are being swamped by reverb. They would sound stronger with less of that. Not bad tho!
shaneynclan - Man I am really into this. Not much I can say bad about it. Maybe do another patch and mix it in.
deadly - nice stuff. Very Jon Hopkins vibes, with a bit of dj shadow thrown in.
fondle mcliknpuss - Nice dark vibes, needs a bit tighter production value imo.
ogunslinger - Nice trip hop vibe on this one. The snare is too generic tho.
offerman - Where is the sub? Get that shit goin and it will improve this track.
dj seizure - I love everything but the snare. It sounds a bit flat to me for some reason.
broxamson - nah, I'm not into this
Siderealdb - I dig it, but the whole song sounds like it's leading up to a bigger drop that never happens.
RightOnTime27 - The whole tune sounds small, like a whisper. I don't know if that is your intention or not tho.
blazinaidan - Again, this sounds a bit too small for some reason. The bass sounds a bit too hollow for my liking as well.
mars - Wow this one is nice. Not enough sub imo. I don't like how most of the bottom is comin from the kick drum.
ninthy4 - That shit is mean! Needs subz
tripwire22 - Totally diggin everything but the snare.
emm - Really put me in the zone on this one!
Krave - Good stuff. The mix seems a bit off so far tho.
ogunslinger - That shit is rollin! I wish the overall sound were a bit larger.
wobbafet - Damn, really quality production on this. I'm chilled out now!
universeofenergy - Really cool intro, you lost me after the drop though.
Danger Co - This track just doesn't seem to go anywhere. Not really my style tho.
tylerblue - Yes, this is big. The snare incredible too.
Fraksure - Bangin that robo step. Nice shit!
hakka - Again, two words "fuck yea"
jaydot - Good shit, it sounds a lil wonky haha.
bradicle - Hell ya that is dope!
abZ - Awesome work as always. Your mixdown is fantastic.
tek_selecta - Good idea, but not the best execution.
Stebrah - I like the start way more than the end.
jakedubber - The goat is awesome haha.
ironik - The lead synth didn't go with the tune imo. I dig it tho haha. Dirty south shit
Bledbox - Very very nice production. Great stuff
We Bang - Really nice! I like the crunchy sound of the bass.
tripwire22 - This second tune is lovely. Again, not really feelin the drums tho for some reason.
reignz - Sorry man, I'm not really feelin this one. Nice long intro, but you lose me with the drop.
The Phantom Banger - I really like this. Everything mixes well with each other. Great stuff.
mashmash - The first one is better to me. Good ole booty shakin shit haha. The second one just needs more direction imo.
sniperDUBB - I like all the drums and such, but the bass and wubs are not good imo.
ENNO - This is a great remix. I really like it.
Johnst - Kinda out there in a way, but not bad. It's so quiet though...
projekt - Very interesting. The very high pitched synth is a bit too repetetive. Nice drums.


I hope I haven't missed anyone


Here is another new one that will be on the "call da ambalamps" ep. Let me know what ya'll think so far!

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[Bledbox]

Cheers to everyone who commented on my pendulum remix! espicially everyone who mentioned how unexpected the drop is because thats one of my favourite things about it...
CBK81cheers for that mate, was a really nice comment, sometimes I doubt my production skills so Im glad someone digs it
I will leave you feedback tomo, just got back from a killa set and need to sleep!

however i do want to say toreignz what do you mean by your comment? the orignal is a 126 house beat, so what do you mean about halftime drums not adding anything to the original?
Don't want to seem like a dick not accepting feedback and stuff, but I do actually listen to what people say about my tunes and bare comments in mind to try and make my songs better, but I need a little bit more to go on than what you said man..

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[zuta]

Johnst

the "piano" melody is too melodic to my taste , i like the tune but without this melody

killer budha

I really like your track , the vocal samples chose , the hi hat in the intro , all , is like a cyborg feeling , you got some gems , keep working n the tune

Projekt

I dont like the synth sound in the intro , sorry man i dont feel your tune , seems like all the instruments where out of tune , don't fit together , and the sounds are cheap

thats for now


PD:CBK81 YOU FORGET ME

[CBK81]

Ok I just threw this together cuz I felt chilled out. I don't normally make these kinds of tunes. Please let me know what you think.

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[bradicle]

Rightyo have changed a few things up (nothing too major)

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[shaneynclan]

Here is another new one that will be on the "call da ambalamps" ep. Let me know what ya'll think so far!
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mad props for dropping a ton of feedback, your track is pretty dope, crazy vibe to it, what sample is that?
I love how the sub bass feels like it pulls in crazy attack on that.
That patch at the end right before the second drop sounds dope as well, good sound design overall.

[bradicle]

@ CBK. Bigups man. Just listened to your tunes on soundcloud, dope as hell. New one also sounding fresh as, keen to hear more!

[jaydot]

@bradicle: In your face banger! Mixdown and mastered it will sound hellish

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Not sure about the bass on my one^ might push it up an octave/change the synth.

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