WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for OCTOBER, 2010

[Phigure]

@ogunslinger: some reverb on the drums would help smooth them into the song a bit better. drum pattern is a tad repetitive, maybe switch it up a bit more and throw some hats in there?

@bradicle: dark vibes! really liking it! The only thing I really have to say is that the hihats are a tad too loud in the mix. Sub sounds nice, good attention to detail, and it flows rather well. snare sounds nice and snappy.

@webang: Well produced and I'm sure it'll get people dancing! I'm liking that purple-y synth with the vibrato!



Here's a tune I started on today after not touching my production gear for a few weeks (busy, busy, busy). Feels good to get back on the buttons. Let me know what you think!

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[Echoi]

Some Brostep ting a ling i started last night

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[Craggle]

Some Brostep ting a ling i started last night

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Bare feeling this ! it has a really nice shuffle to it ! good work

[Echoi]

Some Brostep ting a ling i started last night

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Bare feeling this ! it has a really nice shuffle to it ! good work

Thanks man, first wobble track ive attempted for quite some time

[Debaser1]

Started this little number this morning, kinda ambient dubstep/dnb; I don't really know what fucking genre it is. Have a butchers anyway pleease.
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@echoi: I love this. In full, it could be brilliant I reckon. Maybe a longer build up to a drop or something with some nice swirly pads and verbs, but its deffo a good start.

@phigure: love the vibes from this man. Could do with fattening out a little bit, but its in the right direction for sure. The percussion is really really well done in this. Definitely a cool chilled track though. Crying out for a sub mind.

[GrouchDub]

Soundcloud Excision/Datsik Style

[Beardyman123]

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have a listen, criticise, shwatevaaar

[LordBid]

@Phigure - man sick drums, love how the hats pan around the stereo field. Feelin the darkness on this one. Its pretty bizzare overall and really solid mix-down, everything is sitting right for sure. Pretty sick sick sick man keep doin what your doing, although its not the type of music I normally listen to its great.

@Debaser1 - yea its kinda weird wtf is with the panning on the intro.... I like its innovations. The sub bass is a little loud. Interesting vibes, overall something about this im not feeling, like needs some better eqing on the various instruments to make them sit together.

not commenting on ppl that arnt commenting on others but ill gladly return any feedback.

New project started last night, slow creeper vibes thus the name its not really mix-ed or anywhere near complete what your listening to is an 8 bar loop over and over. just wanna see if people are feelin the groove on this one.

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[Echoi]

not commenting on ppl that arnt commenting on others

Oh go on

[superginger]

#Echoi Very nice mate soooooo liquid I feel like im swimming/tripping or something hahah

#GrouchDub AVSGYDIIIIIIIIIIIUOGASDO FFS THANKS. NOW I DONT NEED TO BUY COCAINE ANYMORE ))) I GOT THIS CLIP!!!!!!! hahahahah omfgggggg mate wicked clip I left a comment on soundcloud aswell!

#lord bid filthy tune mate... maybe work on a better melody.

if anyone wants to give me some feedback, please post a comment on soundcloud pick a track or two in my signature

cheeeers

[a.paul]

@LordBid - has a scream banger feel to it, liking this so far, cant wait to hear more. would be awesome to really screw with the bass line up later on in the song on a second or third drop!
@Echoi - liking the computer noises! bassline is crazy man! fresh sound overall
@Phigure - my kind of tune - love it. so much space in it. percussion is great! i like that you change it up from time to time. cant wait to hear more.
@Bradicle - majestic feel to it. almost reminds me of the skins intro a bit. liking this. cant wait to hear more

started this one last night, any comments would be great. not sure what to do with it, stuck!
thanks in advance
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[Debaser1]

@grouchdub: please do show me how to make shit like this. It's unbelievable. Seriously. Like I can;t comprehend how good that it. Got the makings of a flawless track here mate

[DookieHowserOG]

Echoi - Not usually my type favorite sound.. but I just love the way this bounces. Great stuff man.

GrouchDub - Yeah, that's definitely DatsiK/Excision style.. It's a lot better than my attempt at it. I like the hi pitch synth in there too. Pretty sickening.

Debaser1 - Whatever it is, I like it. It relaxes me.. very dope.

bradicle - I have super lame speakers.. but from what i can hear it sounds pretty dark.. I love the drums and percussions on this one. Great job

And now.. here's something I started on today. Not a lot done on it really, just wanted to see if i could get some feedback on it. Thanks, guys.

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[Grok]

Debaser1: Not sure about the panning in the intro to be honest but it actually servers a purpose making the drop really stand out. Great chord progressions, percussion and vibe. Reminds me of something I can't put my finger on... It's a little bit like M83... or Vangelis (with the horn synths) but that's not what I'm thinking of. Oh well, will probably get back to you when I remember. Good tune anyway, I like the style and feeling to it. I actually put it on again, started doing something else, forgot what I was listening to and thought "ah, I love this tune" when the drop hit, without realising what it was.

GrouchDub: Wow, this is great! Very cool intro. It's like a song of it's own and then the drop... BOOM! Would like a little more weight in the kick but other than that it's solid. Huge wobbles and great bass riff. Too bad it fades out so soon. What a teaser, will definitely like to hear the full version.

LordBid: The triplet drums are cool, makes it really slappy together with those wobbles. You could open up the mix a bit and maybe make the kick/snare a bit heavier. I would like to tell you to put a melody on there but I think it will ruin the sound so I won't, but I feel it needs something more. Not sure what though. I like the filter automation anywhow, same technique Skream uses and it works well.

a.paul: Nice and relaxed. I would like a melody on top, maybe a flute. I hear something in my head which unfortunately isn't there but good work anyway. Nice mix and percussions. I would like even more progression by the way, introducing more elements as it goes.

Here is a new tune I've started on. As usual, any feedback is appreciated.
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[Pete Miles]

Grok- Nice track mate. Like the phase noise!! Well pit together track all good as far as I'm concerned.

Superginger- Like both of the tracks you put mate. Love the trance riff on the second tune. Sets it off nicely bud. Bass sounds great in the first track too.

Lordbid - Experimenting with the sounds I see! Good stuff. Man after my own heart bro!

Beardyman - love the start percussion mate. The track was nicely done. If I'm honest, I was hoping for some mental kick in with crazy shit happening left right and centre, but I'm not criticising. That's just what I wanted to hear. If you massive reese and loads of jump DNB distorted sounds it'd be ace. Good anyway though.

Anyone who wants me to give detailed feedback, drop me a line on soundcloud. It's easier when you got the tunes in front of you!!!

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[sniperDUBB]

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@ LordBid - Nice man NICE - you got something good happening and i cant wait to see what you do with it and what other sounds you bring
@ Echoi - clean just how i like to hear it nice one you got your own sound its cool
@ Phigure - i wanna hear more the percussion is doing it for me so keep it up man

I been doing abit more work on my Katy B remix... let me know what you think about where im at with it so far.

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[bradicle]

@ Pete miles. Sick kick bro. Nice drop!!! Tune sounding dope!

@ Grok. Mean synth! Haha that's quite different, liking it, quite cool vibes!!

@ Debaser1. Not bad man. I think the bass needs a break instead of going through all bars! That tune kind of deserves an on n off bass if you get what I mean?

@ a.paul. Cool little atmos at the start, nice little hats. That is sounding nice man, real nice feel to it, relaxing, deep sub under just rolling around sounds tight! I think it needs maybe even another pad floating under there, give it a bit more depth and fullness.

@ lordbird. Nice little wobble. On the right track! I'm not a big fan of that kind of wobble, but it seems to be sounding ok. Get some more work done n chuck it up

@ Beardyman123. Nice drums. Bass doesn't really go with the drums, bass is too slow for them (in my opinion) Not a bad lil track though!!

@ Phigure. Liking man, sounding pretty nice so far. Nice n lax!!


I've done a bit more, pretty much full song. Still adding bits n pieces. Trying not to add too much more, dont want to over crowed it, but here goes. (Edit: Dunno whats up with my soundcloud, i've uploaded a full length tune, but it's only showing 1min on the embedded bit :S)

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[a.paul]

@Bradicle - really liking this one, great dark atmosphere! the vocals work really well man. great mix, nothing i would change. love that snare!
@Grok - love the intro, snes vibes! great synths man. ikonika style with more of a joker pace id say. love the big bassline at the end.

thanks for the feedback everyone, i've added some flutes:S not sure if i like them though, any feedback would be great!

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[mindcontrol]

@a.paul - maybe tone down the flute so its not so prominent, and turn the bass up? also the percussions
is a a bit loud in certain parts. Don't know what to suggest where the tune should go, but I like that
ambient melody.

@grok - like it kinda grows on you, the drop/bassline is really good, should keep that element in future tracks
also maybe add some wind noises or something lol, in the verse something ambient

@bradicle - like everything besides that melody, kinda ruins the song

Got 2 WIP, kinda messy and losing motivation
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