FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

[narrator]

Nice one again for the feedback so far guys, it's been a great help..

Cheeky bit of Sarcasm I sense?

Haha, no sarcasm for once.

I gave some feedback and got some helpful and nice feedback in return. Big up your bad selves! Quite...

[Asterix]

@bradicle: sick tune bro really liking the melody you worked to put into it

@zonetrooper5 : I like the beggining but then i think there is too much going on ..my opinion

@kri8ive : Its some nice brostep just next time comment on other peoples too

Few new trax give them a listen comments on soundcloud are appreciated

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[Debaser1]

So the only feedback Ive got is "nice melody, keep it up".

I didnt know it was a focus group.

[substep infrabass-rectal]

@Debasser - ...because there is really nothing wrong with the tune - I like how original it is, reminds of a chip tune which adds freshness. Melody is spot on and drums work well, glass breaking effect also very interesting. one of the best tunes I heard in a long time - tune with identity - finish it mate

There was a long time when I made a chilled and experimental tune - this is my attempt to this whole future bass genre
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[JD_LEGION]

Only produced a couple dubstep tracks, still got some works in progress im gonna get finished off asap! i mainly produce grime, hip hop n other stuff

But feedback would be much appreciated still!

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[A-List]

So we posted our tune on the last page and AGAIN as per ALWAYS with our songs they get overlooked? this isnt annoying!

[substep infrabass-rectal]

@A-List - because people are jelaous man - tune is bangin, I'd consider slight woble changes earlier in the tune - but slight for example making the wobble faster sometimes - good tune everything works well - tight mix, maybe kick should be more prominent

@jd legion - u need to get more into 'dubstep' structure as beat u posted is very, very hip hopish - not my cup of tea - sorry

[Sinisterbeats]

@a-list - bangin tune mate, right up my street. Got nothing bad to say really. Mix is tight and punchy, great use of verb and panning. Quality tune.

@Subtep infrabass - big fan of your more minimal stuff you do under the exp. name. Been a big influence on some of my more recent stuff. Love the tune you posted, hope to here from you in that vein.

[Debaser1]

AList: That percussion is genius. Gives the mix so much atmosphere, and space. I like how uncrowded the low end is. And those wobbles are good i reckon, just need some more presence. The sub is good, but maybe just turn up the mid range ones. Everything is else is brilliant in this though. So spoooooky!

[larzol]

this is my tune completly finished now. its quite dirty :D::D:


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(i did put feedback for others its on the bottom of the last page)

[Derezzed]

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Hello,

I'm new 2 the forum, hope i posted it in the correct place of the forum.
Hope to hear your comments on my track.

Peace

Derezzed

Download the song in MP3 or WAV http://www.facebook.com/pages/Derezzed/132144150173857

[dj seizure]

this is my tune completly finished now. its quite dirty :D::D:


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(i did put feedback for others its on the bottom of the last page)

AHHH MANNN, THAT'S JUST LIK COMPLETE FILTH!

[LordBid]

@Asterix - Dude pretty dope Sub might be a little loud but no biggie I wish that snare hit lower in the frequencies though its a little flat sounding. Could maybe stand for a little more variation or fills or something but it sounds fucking cool. Nice dark vibes, and creative use of space especially in the sub area. Is there a reason why its so short or is it just a clip?

@Debasser - Mix def sounds really full, great job there. I would like to hear more upper end click on the kick as it kinda muddies up down there in the sub not bad but something to think about. The melody actually made me laugh at the drop. I think the beat could be more dynamic cus it kind of just sounds like a loop that was thrown over the b-line, and fallow the bass movements with the kicks to give it some more movement. Some fantastic ideas here but I think its lacking some energy to keep it really going. Could be in the hats too man, they are kinda quiet and not punchy enough. Great mix though!

@A-List - Cool percussion like im in king kong's jungle haha! B-line gets kinda dull and could use more variation sooner than it comes in. That kick is solid though really keeps the beat going. Kinda reminds me of old-school jungle with a dub-step setting. But yea I don't think there is enough varation and changes to keep it going. I think those tribal drums could do with some switchups and that would probably be all you would need. Otherwise this is sick and well mixed!

@harlrayner - vocals need to be more clear in the mix. the sub is way too loud I believe. drums sound uberloopy which I always find a little boring, but I understand why they are that way in this one. pretty well mixed aside from what I mentioned. Not really my kind of song though...

@larzol - your track was not available

@TaikiOfficialUK - pretty interesting but your drums are really really boring, no fills or anything just kick snare kick snare. Like the mid-range noises they are saweeet! mix sounds pretty nice. But yea that stagnant beat makes this kind of boring to me.

Here is my track for the vaski-Jelly remix competition have a listen tell me what you think(BE CRITICAL) I will probably make some changes to it level-wise before its submitted but its mostly done

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[sniperDUBB]

@ Lordbid - Nice one man but yeh like you said abit more tweaking on the levels and it will be sounding like a gem.
@ A-List - Percussion is tight... abit more variation in the overall track would be nice tho.
@ Debaser1 - You probably just got comments like nice work keep it up because it is nice bro i wudnt change a thing just keep doing what you do

Let me know what you all think of this...
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[ogunslinger]

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ill post feedback if I even get any....

[Conflux]

@Sniperdubb Nice intro. I think you should add a bit more silence before the first drop. Love choir samples.. The second buildup is good but i think it gets a bit too hectic with the midrange. I dont think it suits the choir samples. Just my taste though. Otherwise the production is good! Nice one

@Lordbid Nice head nodder this one! Love it when those hats come in, maybe they could be a bit crisper? I would like some more highs in the snare, probably just a bit of eqing. Good variation through the track. Second drop is great! Really enjoyed it.

@larzol Think the kick is too loud and snare too quiet. The broken glass works well. I think you need to add more variation, get a bit repetitive in my opinion. Cool idea though.

Thanks for all the feedback on my last track! Hope you enjoy this new one.
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[LordBid]

@Sniperdub - not a fan of those choir samples they sound kinda messed up at some parts. I Get what your trying to do there for sure, But yea they sound funky in some parts. Drop is pretty solid and I like the melody its pretty slick. but yea when those choirs delay around it sounds nasty and not in a good way. The drums could def stand out more in the mix kick and snare sound a little weak to me.

@ Conflux - Bass needs some meat on It I think doesn't dominate the stereo field as well as I think it should. I think that your baseline should be more dynamic and interact with the drums better as I really like the drum track I think it builds tension and if the bass were to fallow it better It would sound slick. Def cool kinda neuro vibe that I like. I think that and the snare needs some more low end maybe. Otherwise its sounding pretty good.

[hutyluty]

@Conflux- Nice intro and pads, drums a tad tinny, too much treble? (just my opinion. The bassline is sick, really well done rhythmically and fitting in with the beat. The pads which come in around 2:00 are a bit quiet perhaps. The little breakdown at 3:10 is pretty spooky aswell, although it was so quiet I did actually think the song had ended before bbeing hit by the blusdgeon of the drop again. Good work!

@sniperdub- like the hits at the start and chaotic choirs like, doesnt really sound in tune, not quite wide enough if you know what i mean either, maybe increase the panning to both sides and turn it up? The percussion is very nice but those high pitched noises just make my brain hurt. Kind of doctor p like, i spose and kids'd go mad for it in a rave but not my cup of tea. Stick a sub in, or increase the volume if there is one already so I can feel the bass

@lordbid-like the hats in the intro, robot vocals sound ominous in many ways... The drop kind of lacks any real BWAM factro though, you sound like youre cutting too many frequencies out perhaps, I don't like too clean mixes, a bit of mud here and there is good. Nicely put together though for what it is, found myself nodding along to it

I'm gonna leave 2 because I'm just greedy

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[nonXero]

@narrator Good intro man.. like the beat. The deep bass is sick too! Liking the small breaks in the basslines! Good stuff.

@Asterix Nice bass. Deep!

@substep infrabass-rectal like the intro... bass is wickid too. Deep and murky. Feelin the melody/vibes here! gj!

Here's one from my upcoming "DubtroniX LP" titled "Jenova"! Enjoy! Feedback - good or bad is appreciated!



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[Debaser1]

Larzol: Very very clever. I absolutely love hearing new variations on dubstep. This thing really got me going. That kick and bass is superb. Maybe the wobbles could be a tad louder. Your samples are pretty genius too. BIG up.