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@ weedcali: I like your sound. Your tune is a bit repetetive though. More variartion would be nice. An irie sample, a stab, guitar riff ... I like the sound of your wobble. This tune has a lot of potential. Eager to hear the finishing product!
@ billuf: Track is not really my cup of tea, but the production vallue is ok though. Snare could use a bit more punch or layering. Add an extra clap on your snare to make it sound punchier.
@ jakedubber: First of all: where's the sub? Only hear midrange sounds? Drums needs more work, especially your snare. The Apocalyps Now sample is cool, but is not that original anymore. Your pad is cool, but try to bring variation in it. I'm not too found of the midrange wobble. Try to make it more subtle.
@ Debaser: I like the idea! Pads and synths are nice. You need to work on your drums. The snare needs a lot more punch. Also your mixdown could use some work. It's sounds a bit flat from time to time. Cool tune though, looking forward when it's finished.
@ Palo 56: Very nice production, allthough I'm not a fan of this sound. The switch ups are well done. Drums could be punchier, especially your snare! Nothing more to add really, I think you'll figure it out!
@ Remokari: drums and sub are well done! Strangly enough there are some parts in your tune I really like, but also dislike. I think it's cool when you wobble that synth like in 0.54. The synth in the intro is nice! Keep it up!
@Ianmassoth: Nice! Really love the synth! But I'm missing some elements though, it's sound a bit hollow. Listen to MDMA fe which is also striped down. Because off a few it sounds warmer and fuller. Try not to overuse the delay on the synth though. Nice tune!
@ beatbum: I like the piano intro. I'm not to found of the drop though. Production vallue is a ok. Also there are a lot of sounds that fits the tune perfectly. But it just doesn't do it for me. That main wobble synth sound to digital for me.
@ Fatach: It's really hard to give feedback on your tune as it sounds really weird to me. There are some ok parts in it, but the overal feeling is chaotic. My advice is to strip down your tune and rebuild everything. Chose one main lead to get the attention of your listeners.
@ weedcali: Mixdown is like your previous one a-ok. I like the piano in the intro, but it's way too long. I'm getting a bit bored of it after a while. Add new elements to make the whole sound more interesting. I'm not really found of the wobbleing sound in the intro. The drop is cool though, but drums kind off fade away. Keep it up!
@wub: very nice! drums are awsome, I love the synth and I even like the movie sample. Nothing more to add really! Nice work!
@Critical Sound System: Tune has potential. Work on your mixdown and bring more variation in your tune, and I think you'll have a nice finishing product. I'm also missing a good pad of extra elements besides the wobble to make your tune interesting.
@Debaser1: I really like the musicbox-like intro, the drops comes to sudden though. Your tune would 'drop' better if there a built up in your intro. Even a rising fx would be more effective. Tune is cool, but I'm missing some variety though. Keep it up!
@Beardyman123: Intro is a bit odd, but cool. The bass and synth are overwhelming. I think you'll have to work on your mixdown. Drop a few elements or synths, because there's to much going on.
@Gonzodj: This tune has a lot of potential! Really love the synth, it's a bit Kromestar a like! Very nice! Hats sound a bit to hard in the mix. Tune lacks a bit of sub to.
Overall nice tune, just work on your mixdown and I think you'll have a nice dancefloor tune! Big up!
@ Craggle: Build up to the drop is very nice. I'm not to found of the wobble-ing synth though. Drums are very crisp, nice work on that! Your sub also sounds warm and bouncy! Nice! Pitty about the midrange action, because I really like this!
@C Average: Awsome intro! Really like that '50 sounding sample. I'm not found of the wobble, but that's just a matter of taste I suppose. Production vallue is very good! Snare could use more punch and delay. Nice job!
@Psythe: Tune sounds a bit too distorted. Not really found of the intro. Sound of the wobble is ok, but I'm not really stunned by it. Try to bring more variety in your tune. I think there's potential!
@amphibian: Lovely tune! Those pads are unbelievable! Drums are nice, as is your sub. I'm missing a main melody or vocal sample to get things more going. But overall very nice tune!
I really hope there's more than one member on this board who will give feedback on my tune. It's really not ok posting your tune here, asking people to comment it and leaving without even listening to the tunes of your fellow members. Rant over.
This is my new tune. Hope you'll like it!
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BTW! the nice indian(?) singing is wicked! you should bring it in the first drop too.