new to writing dubstep tunes. feedback is cool

[nickv123]

I just wrote this song the other day after getting native instrument's Massive. keep in mind i have never written any dubstep tunes. https://dl.dropbox.com/u/5380056/tree.mp3

[kaiori breathe]

I just wrote this song the other day after getting native instrument's Massive. keep in mind i have never written any dubstep tunes. https://dl.dropbox.com/u/5380056/tree.mp3

Anyway, there's good sounds in here, harmonic minor scale? The nintendo sounds stand out as a little out of place to me, the track feels very full but not disorganised or too chaotic to follow which is good. This is good for a first. I'd maybe work on getting a little more of a groovy swing feel in your drums, I think it could help this track a lot. I like your intro, very atmospheric and dark.

You'll get more feedback if your tune is easily accessible, I'm not going to lie, we're lazy, opening a new page, accepting a download, opening WMP, its a lot of hard work for us. Hosting on soundcloud or somewhere similar will get you a lot more listens. Also, people, as a general rule don't want to download something if they don't know the quality of it before hand. Not getting at you for it, just letting you know it'll get you more listens if you appease peoples' horrible laziness

[nickv123]

thanks for the info. you shouldn't have to download the link though. it should just open a new window and play. i have been meaning to open a soundcloud account but im lazy as well haha. and good ear, i figured the harmonic minor would get the "dark" mood across well.

[nickv123]

http://soundcloud.com/nickv123/tree

[Chark]

Thanks for the SoundCloud link!

I really liked it, the atmosphere was great, and the bassline was good as shit.

I'd download it, for sure.

[nickv123]

thanks man, im glad you enjoyed it