GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

unsigned forum members' tracks & place for feedback
Forum rules
By using this "Dubs" sub-forum, you acknowledge that you have read, understood and agreed with our terms of use for this site. Click HERE to read them. If you do not agree to our terms of use, you must exit this site immediately. We do not accept any responsibility for the content, submissions, information or links contained herein. Users posting content here, do so completely at their own risk.

Quick Link to Production Forum
Locked
graish
Posts: 486
Joined: Sun Dec 28, 2008 7:29 am

GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

Post by graish » Wed Dec 15, 2010 7:01 pm

OPERATION SAVE ASS
Soundcloud

M6 [updated version]
Soundcloud
:mrgreen:
Last edited by graish on Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:37 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Top
graish
Posts: 486
Joined: Sun Dec 28, 2008 7:29 am

Re: GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

Post by graish » Fri Dec 17, 2010 1:37 am

:6:
Top
User avatar
fuzz_2k
Posts: 2717
Joined: Sun Apr 13, 2008 1:53 pm
Location: Brighton/cheltenham - UK
Contact:
Contact fuzz_2k

Re: GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

Post by fuzz_2k » Fri Dec 17, 2010 11:20 am

lovely organic sounding intro, and the track seems to have perfect structure!
:D:
static_cast wrote:STOP MESSING WITH THE KICK DRUM AND MAKE SOME MUSIC
http://soundcloud.com/fuzz2k
Soundcloud
OtherbrotherRecordings
Gradient Audio
AlterkationRecordings
GammaAudio
Top
User avatar
ARTFX
Posts: 205
Joined: Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:01 am
Location: Rotterdam, the Netherlands
Contact:
Contact ARTFX

Re: GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

Post by ARTFX » Fri Dec 17, 2010 1:35 pm

Operation Save -Ass: I love the intro work, sounds very solid, the vocal is a little to loud maybe, just a very little.
Nice drop, was hoping for something more filthy there, but it suits the track very well.

M6: Good sounds, same feedback as the other one, just great. Love the musical parts you've got there.
Image
↑ CLICK ME! ↑

Soundcloud
Top
graish
Posts: 486
Joined: Sun Dec 28, 2008 7:29 am

Re: GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

Post by graish » Sat Dec 18, 2010 3:54 pm

fuzz2k- nice one mate, I played parallel dimentions and faceplant last night, both amazing tracks!

artfx- cheers for the constructive criticism, i'll look into the volume of that vocal.
Top
Boneez
Posts: 4
Joined: Sat Dec 18, 2010 6:05 pm

Re: GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

Post by Boneez » Sat Dec 18, 2010 6:23 pm

Track 3 is so Minimalicious
Top
graish
Posts: 486
Joined: Sun Dec 28, 2008 7:29 am

Re: GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

Post by graish » Sun Dec 19, 2010 4:40 pm

:mrgreen:
Top
User avatar
syrup
Reigning Mini-Mix King
Posts: 8351
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 2:18 pm
Location: down in my heart

Re: GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

Post by syrup » Sun Dec 19, 2010 8:11 pm

Well i agree on the vocal bit in the save-ass, it's a tad too loud, nice track, though :)

I like the flute bit in M6 a lot,good job on that. :) But i think the break could use some processing, it sounds too "lo-fi", doesn't really go well with the rest of the tune
dubfordessert wrote:you can jizz on me if you want
Top
graish
Posts: 486
Joined: Sun Dec 28, 2008 7:29 am

Re: GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

Post by graish » Tue Dec 21, 2010 11:39 pm

johney - yea I know what you mean about the break in "M6", I've fixed it now, just need to upload edited version. thanks for the feedback :W:
Top
graish
Posts: 486
Joined: Sun Dec 28, 2008 7:29 am

Re: GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

Post by graish » Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:07 pm

^
Top
User avatar
syrup
Reigning Mini-Mix King
Posts: 8351
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 2:18 pm
Location: down in my heart

Re: GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

Post by syrup » Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:20 pm

have you uploaded the "fixed" version yet? teh flash is behaving well suspicious in the Opera
dubfordessert wrote:you can jizz on me if you want
Top
graish
Posts: 486
Joined: Sun Dec 28, 2008 7:29 am

Re: GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

Post by graish » Mon Jan 03, 2011 6:38 pm

yea, I just uploaded the updated version. The break is the same, I just removed the part that sounded lo-fi.
Top
User avatar
sigraH neB
Posts: 127
Joined: Wed May 19, 2010 4:17 pm
Location: KC
Contact:
Contact sigraH neB

Re: GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

Post by sigraH neB » Mon Jan 03, 2011 7:34 pm

The structures here in these tunes are great! Only thing i would change would be in "operation save ass". Your reggea snare break sounds great, but I would just suggest leaving the reverb on the last hit, the way you have it makes for a small empty space before the tune resumes.

Other than that, nice work man!
If you have a tune you would like to be considered for release, please send submissions to the contacts below. All submissions should contain 2 or 3 tunes and a little bio about yourself. Thanks!
Aim:RoguedubsBen
http://www.facebook.com/roguedubs
http://www.roguedubs.com
http://www.soundcloud.com/roguedubs
Top
graish
Posts: 486
Joined: Sun Dec 28, 2008 7:29 am

Re: GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

Post by graish » Mon Jan 03, 2011 8:14 pm

sigraH neB wrote:Your reggea snare break sounds great, but I would just suggest leaving the reverb on the last hit, the way you have it makes for a small empty space before the tune resumes.
Other than that, nice work man!
I'll take that into consideration, thanks for the feedback
Top
User avatar
syrup
Reigning Mini-Mix King
Posts: 8351
Joined: Mon May 25, 2009 2:18 pm
Location: down in my heart

Re: GRAISH - Operation Save-Ass & M6

Post by syrup » Tue Jan 04, 2011 1:42 pm

is anything happening with these yet?

or could you pass a copy my way? :D


by the way, i think he´s right with the snare :wink:
dubfordessert wrote:you can jizz on me if you want
Top
Locked

Return to “Dubs & Tunes for Feedback”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 0 guests