over the rainbow by hypnos feed back would be appreciated

[hypnos1]

Soundcloud
what do yall think?

[hypnos1]

Critique plox

[hypnos1]

Soundcloud
remastered

[TeoTransform]

Boring

[hypnos1]

wow... helpful

[egoless]

Soundcloud
what do yall think?

very thin drums, too loud wobbless, too quiet sub bass...

[DigitsUK]

personally i like the drum feel, but you've gone completley counter to the emotion and mood of the song wit the wobble and tried blowing my face off but just ruined everything~! i think that this track split in two, putting the wobble (with a more variation) to a phat hard hitting snare drum beat would sound sick cus that wobble is fucking fierce!!! and keeping over the rainbow and the drums with a more mellow vibe and wobbles to show to the mood would sound better.

[hypnos1]

@egoless and digitsUK thank you much more helpful. i agree that there is something not quite right about this track and i aim to resolve it. hopefully your input will aid me in that.
also every other comment on the sub was that it was too phat. personally i think i need to hear it thru a club set up to know for sure

[MrTommyJay]

sick track man. I feel theres a drastic change between the beginning and the drop. Easily solved by taking out the beat for 4 beats and adding a sound that foreshadows a drop such as a sweeping pad or something. The beats lacking a little umph as well, but that wobble synth is SIIICK!!! its so nasty!! if you can find a way to properly pull this all together, its def a 5 star track in my book!

[hypnos1]

@mrtommyjay i definitely need a warning before the drop. the beat iunno about. ill hafta look and see what i used since everybody seems to think the drums are lacking. thnx for the input

[DigitsUK]

another quick n easy way to prep for a drop, just a long crash cymbal reversed, works a beaut, and if you want it to play back out just add the origional linked up. sounds pretty cool i think dependent when needed and what not.

p.s any chance you can check out my song, freshly made today, interested in your thoughts on it D: (its my sig)

[hypnos1]

p.s any chance you can check out my song, freshly made today, interested in your thoughts on it D: (its my sig)

i had already opened it in a new window when i read that lol

[DigitsUK]

haha nice one ^^