Cocaine - First Track FEEDBACK PLEASE

[squidstep]

Hi all, this is my first time posting here, and to start off I have a track a just put out last night. I'm looking for any and all feedback and also for any other outlets to get my music around to the right people. Thanks for any help and have a good day!

Soundcloud

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQb-5vhvE-c

Like/Thumbs Up if you enjoy what you hear!

[squidstep]

Bump, could really use some help, advice, or just positive reactions

[hypnos1]

i like the intro. but i think the center piece of this track is the rhythmic almost tidal feeling that the bass conjures up. the cocaine sample seems out of place though. def a badass piece

[jargs]

I'm gonna tell the truth and say, needs a shit load of work.

Keep practising though, you'll get there in a couple years

[hypnos1]

I'm gonna tell the truth and say, needs a shit load of work.

that's a bit ambiguous. mostly for my sake what aspects of this piece did you believe needed enhancing?

[jargs]

looking at some of the other tunes on this forum i guess it's not that bad in comparison actually. still its a bit stale/unoriginal.

[allhellno]

Needs more filth!! :]

[hypnos1]

Needs more filth!! :]

i cant not agree with that