Borgore - Guided Relaxtion Dub (ESSTAR REMIX)

[esstar]

I spit on Dubstep, I will be putting out a new remix of a well known Dubstep track every week! Spread the word!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ho3G0h7P_qY


Peace out!

[jargs]

wank

[esstar]

any feedback as to why it is 'wank' ??

[honey-d]

any feedback as to why it is 'wank' ??

Now I'm not saying it's wank, though it's really not my thing at all. Here's my critiques:

1. Vocals not mixed very well in. Everytime the borgore song throws the whole sonic spectrum (ie most of the time) your vocals are completely drowned out.
1a. I can't understand any of the lyrics (probably due to the bad mixing and also because I'm notoriously bad with english accents)
2. Guided Relaxation dub should never be played again. It's the corniest, most cheeseball tear out track and (for whatever reason) it's been played out to death. If you wanna jump on a tear out track and rap that's fine, but there's no reason to rap on some shit that's 2 years old. You could have easily taken that whole rap and just glued it onto a different, newer track and it would have been a lot fresher.
3. Not a lot of groove with the rap itself. It just sort of machine guns out like a lot of dnb/dubstep mcs do. Dubstep is such a versatile genre because you can go fast and you can go slow but I never really hear people do that when MCing over dubstep. On that LA Dubstep mixtape that came out a while ago almost all the American rappers would rap half time and then the UK dudes usually spit double time but nobody utilizes both. Think kind of like Busta Rhymes, he's got his slow laid back parts but then has his parts where he's on a rampage.

Anyway, not the worst thing in the world. A lot of people will just say "don't rap on dubstep beats!" but they stupid. I love rapping to dubstep and it's bomb shit to freestyle to and can sound really great.

My biggest suggestion is to look more into what you like about the rappers you like, and what you like about the dubstep that you like, and then take that a little deeper. MCs on dubstep 99% of the time sound pretty interchangeable. If you make yourself stand out you're already waaaaay ahead of the game. Good luck dude

[esstar]

thanks for the proffesional response, and I understand you might not understand where I'm coming from as I got a british accent, and the vocal mix I can only put that down to the upload to youtube taking the quality down a bit.

As for 'deranger', you don't know me at all, so stop to think before you call me an asshole, is a forum not for people to show there stuff and to get feedback ? Don't even answer that, I won't argue with a fool like you over the internet.

[jargs]

quit MCing you ain't goin no where

[wfg1]

+the fact this song is probably the worst song in the world.

[charliefoy]

+the fact this song is probably the worst song in the world.

THIS.

[wfg1]

+the fact this song is probably the worst song in the world.

THIS.

hahahahahahahahahahahahahah

[joeki]

I think your rapping is actually better than the the track you are rapping over.

[chico_red]

it is not a remix. It is just a badly mixed vocal. Surely you didn't record that vocal aiming to go along with that tune? It sounds like it belongs somewhere else!
Your rapping ain't that bad though.. better than Prof Green at least!!!

[BLACKSMOKEMONSTER]

was reading this thread and laughing hard !
then i liserned
its pretty bad in fairness lol
you want feedback more than insults from people that really hate borgore then post in the dubs section about your tunes .