My first track!!!

[Drsmoketto]

Please let me know what you think! All criticisms and opinions appreciated



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[wrexile]

This is great for a first track mate!
I've said this loads now, but I'm going off the really heavy bassline stuff, but I can still appreciate it =)
The production's great, great build up, nice atmospherics and a good sense of structure The only thing I can pick out is that sometimes the subs clash with each other but it's barely noticable =)

Good job sir! Keep it up and I can see some great things coming in future One thing I think will happen is that you'll find your own sound, which ends up feeling so much more rewarding =)

[BenJonesLikeWhoa]

I really like this, I'd like to know what you used to make your synths? and what program did you make this in?

[BLACKSMOKEMONSTER]

first tune is good ,
id turn the hats down a bit tho .
try adding some atmosphere to the background of the tune too to give that sombre feel as the bass .

[Drsmoketto]

Cheers guys, really appreciate the feedback
I will take all your comments into account and post an updated version soon!
Im currently using Fruity Loops 9, and for the synth i've mixed it up with Massive and Wasp XT.... been listening to a lot of Datsik recently, hence the heavy basslines ha.