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[Feedback] Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by simongeorgyd » Tue Jan 11, 2011 8:40 am

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dzjSl2EfL7U

Not been making dubstep recently, just got back on the wagon so feedback most appreciated here peeps??

Soz I couldn't get the video to show up in here so you'll have to paste it...

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by phrex » Tue Jan 11, 2011 8:46 am

complete rubbish - sorry mate.
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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by simongeorgyd » Tue Jan 11, 2011 11:16 pm

Anything constructive or just bitter slate? Where are your tracks at anyway, the link to your myspace either doesn't exist or has expired?

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by phrex » Wed Jan 12, 2011 1:26 pm

soundcloud.com/phrex

there is not much to say about your track tbh... and i'm just telling you the heavy truth about it in the hope that you will try to produce your OWN stuff with OWN ideas and an OWN approach to it...

it sounds just like all the 100000 other boring so-called-poppy-dubstep stuff.

deal with it
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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by simongeorgyd » Wed Jan 12, 2011 10:18 pm

I know what your saying but I don't make it to simply chern it out, I make it because I enjoy making it! And if for a second you dare put me into the category of the 1 trick pony then let these rapidly change your opinion!

Dirty - www.youtube.com/watch?v=z4Cmiftn7aY

Jazzy - www.youtube.com/watch?v=W0oReOPxg4w

Ambient - http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=pl ... oMqNIjP7WA

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by simongeorgyd » Wed Jan 12, 2011 10:53 pm

Seriously peeps, I've recieved alot of agro over this tune and I wanna know whether I should delete the file and all contents or carry on promoting it!! I'm gonna let the true dubsteppers decide????

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by martello » Wed Jan 12, 2011 10:55 pm

vulvavibration wrote:soundcloud.com/phrex

....

it sounds just like all the 100000 other boring so-called-poppy-dubstep stuff.

deal with it
if producer enjoys (!) what he's doing and there is listeners (and there is) then whats wrong with that poppy-stuff? you and me and 1000 other people don't like it, 1000000 people love it. and I really hear some being "poppy-stuff" potential in this track:) well done.

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only u decide, not others, carry on!
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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by phrex » Wed Jan 12, 2011 11:01 pm

he's asking for feedback you dopehead :6:

if he want's to continue doing this kinda stuff - i don't care much tbh

i'm off here. no need for bad vibrations. i told you what i think of it and that's it. rest is up to you
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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by martello » Wed Jan 12, 2011 11:04 pm

all cool:)

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by Ayatollah » Wed Jan 12, 2011 11:18 pm

It's just another typical uninspired pop remix. There is a time and place for everything, including your tune. But dsf is definitely not it, do understand that you'll only get flak for this tune here.

It sounds like something that lots of people would listen to though, and you say you had fun making it. so i think you should carry on promoting it.

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by simongeorgyd » Wed Jan 12, 2011 11:28 pm

I started out in DnB and like everyone loved pendulum's earlies but naturally like everyone, hate what their doing now! The tunes I make are intended to please all..bring people to the scene and just as importantly cater for people within the scene. I WILL NOT be tarnished with the same brush! If people from the scene don't like it but people that think they like dubstep (beacuse of this tune and the likes) do, then I can't see much point in continuing down this route...hence the reason I'm asking for true ninja opinions!!??

Oh yer, Peace all lol

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by Ayatollah » Wed Jan 12, 2011 11:39 pm

ok if you want to cater to "people from the scene" and if you by that mean the dsf hivemind then I'll have to say no, do not continue down this route

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by simongeorgyd » Wed Jan 12, 2011 11:44 pm

Before making judgement on this tune alone make sure you listen to the following....

www.youtube.com/watch?v=W0oReOPxg4w

www.youtube.com/watch?v=z4Cmiftn7aY

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=pl ... oMqNIjP7WA

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by stappard » Thu Jan 13, 2011 2:28 am

simongeorgyd wrote:I know what your saying but I don't make it to simply chern it out, I make it because I enjoy making it! And if for a second you dare put me into the category of the 1 trick pony then let these rapidly change your opinion!

Dirty - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z4Cmiftn7aY

Jazzy - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W0oReOPxg4w

Ambient - http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=pl ... oMqNIjP7WA

jazzy wasnt jazzy, ambient wasnt ambient....the dirty one WAS dirty though

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by phrex » Thu Jan 13, 2011 2:32 am

-w-
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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by simongeorgyd » Thu Jan 13, 2011 11:22 pm

Anyone care to add to this??

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dzjSl2EfL7U

Cheers for listening

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by Pada » Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:06 am

stappard wrote:
simongeorgyd wrote:I know what your saying but I don't make it to simply chern it out, I make it because I enjoy making it! And if for a second you dare put me into the category of the 1 trick pony then let these rapidly change your opinion!

Dirty - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z4Cmiftn7aY

Jazzy - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W0oReOPxg4w

Ambient - http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=pl ... oMqNIjP7WA

jazzy wasnt jazzy, ambient wasnt ambient....the dirty one WAS dirty though
haha

Production sounds ok actually i know a lot of people who would like it, not my thing at all though!
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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by Retrotation » Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:58 am

yeah productions good, you guys slam on this shit way too hard. What's wrong with making music?

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by C AverRage » Fri Jan 14, 2011 2:08 am

Good Job mayn!!.. Pretty Sick.. I like the Glitch mob esk sound

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by particle-jim » Fri Jan 14, 2011 2:38 am

production is solid... shame it's lacking any originality and it's entirely predictable, the noobtube kids will love it no doubt but to me pop songs with a bait wobble and a cheap halfstep beat don't cut it, heard it all a million times before

the frustrating thing is you seem to be a technically solid producer but doing pop remixes to get hits on noobtube is just a waste, make your own tunes with your own sound man

also i gotta say i agree with stappard in saying that the "jazzy" one wasn't jazzy and the "ambient" one certainly wasn't ambient, both of them where standard wobblers like your rihanna rmx, well produced but uninspired and unoriginal

find your own sound
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