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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by simongeorgyd » Fri Jan 14, 2011 7:07 pm

I hear what your saying folks, guess I'm just a sucker for a commecial banger lol Club response for these has been really good and I assumed the traint would follow through the scene. Thing is like I said before I don't make these to get big hits on youtube i make them because I enjoy doing it and like everyone enjoy the look on peoples faces when they listen. All the while people are feeling them I'm gonna keep making them although the next track made will take into account everything everyone of you has said to some degree and hopefully be more inspiring..

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by simongeorgyd » Sun Jan 16, 2011 2:24 pm

I guess I'm just a sucker for a commercial banger lol I've had very good club response to this and wanted to find out if this followed through the scene LOL. Like I said earlier I do enjoy making this stuff and like everyone enjoy more the look on peoples faces when they listen. Although I understand where your coming from and the next track made will take into account everyone of your comments

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by Moxix » Sun Jan 16, 2011 3:39 pm

Hey mate i havent been using this forum much it seems to have got pretty harsh, good production. lot of elites on here haha

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by daddy mchectic » Sun Jan 16, 2011 4:09 pm

Listened tot his a few times. Really crisp production. Acapella bits used really well and in the right places.

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by simongeorgyd » Sun Jan 16, 2011 4:12 pm

Theres hope yet lol Cheers lads

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by mikus » Sun Jan 16, 2011 5:53 pm

Forget all these narrow-minded dickheads. It's a solid track. Well done. Keep it up!!

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by simongeorgyd » Wed Jan 19, 2011 9:59 pm

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by amek » Wed Jan 19, 2011 10:15 pm

Sounds solid man, rihanna's not my thing but if i heard this in a club i sure wouldn't be complaining.

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by simongeorgyd » Sun Jan 23, 2011 11:51 pm

Respect lads!

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by syrup » Mon Jan 24, 2011 7:09 pm

the melody is ok.

but it´s a remix of...
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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by jamesjames » Wed Jan 26, 2011 12:02 am

simongeorgyd wrote:I know what your saying but I don't make it to simply chern it out, I make it because I enjoy making it! And if for a second you dare put me into the category of the 1 trick pony then let these rapidly change your opinion!

Dirty - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z4Cmiftn7aY

Jazzy - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W0oReOPxg4w

Ambient - http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=pl ... oMqNIjP7WA
its cool you enjoy it but your song sounds like power tools and thats not bass :mrt:

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by simongeorgyd » Tue Feb 01, 2011 10:36 pm

Lol! For one JCB James, if power tools sounded anything like that then by jove I'd quit the music game in a second to listen to the harmonious sounds of my sds drill chasing out walls! Secondly, please note that if you owned a decent set of monitors (or even speakers for that matter) you would be subject to the large amount of 50hz featuring in this track, a frequency falling directly into the bass frequency category lol

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by jamesjames » Wed Feb 02, 2011 9:33 pm

obviously there is bass in there, and obviously these arnt power tools. i happen to have 8" krks so i know what it sounds like. but dubstep still isnt about grindy epic synths and pop vocals and it all tends to sound exactly same, -e-

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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by capo ultra » Thu Feb 03, 2011 1:13 pm

the 'ambient' one has a beat??????
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Re: Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by simongeorgyd » Thu Feb 03, 2011 7:26 pm

You being serious mate? Whats up you not feeling it?

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Re: [Feedback] Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by mike741 » Fri Feb 04, 2011 2:27 am

nice, clean, quality song! i could easily mistake it for a big name dubstep artist's work. don't let these hipsters get to you theyre just bitter no one likes their music :)

constructive criticism: the bassline could use more variation to keep it engaging, and maybe try mixing the drums up a bit. i liked the sound but the beat wasn't quite strong enough to keep repeating like it does. it sounds nice but after a couple bars it gets dull, ya know?

keep up the good work!

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Re: [Feedback] Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by phrex » Fri Feb 04, 2011 11:19 am

seriously - how can rubbish like this get more recognition (although 3/4 is negative) than some great pieces in the dubs section?
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Re: [Feedback] Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by pete_bubonic » Fri Feb 04, 2011 6:18 pm

Owweeeee catching heat for this one aren't you. I thought it was very reminiscent of a lot of the commercial dubstep remixes doing the rounds. I think the problem is it is just a bit generic. I could hear it being played on radio, it does need a bit more sound design to it I think to get in the commercial league. What you got is a decent foundation for creating this kinda beat, best current example is that new magnetic man tune, commercial vibes, but has the polished little touches and skippy rhythm. http://www.youtube.com/user/MagneticMan ... RnDIXsGIyc Some of Joker's remixes as well are real good reference material for the sort of little touches and sound design to make a real commercial dubstep tune.
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Re: [Feedback] Rihanna - Only Girl (Commercial Dubstep Mix)

Post by simongeorgyd » Fri Feb 04, 2011 6:34 pm

vulvavibration wrote:seriously - how can rubbish like this get more recognition (although 3/4 is negative) than some great pieces in the dubs section?
shame.
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Ever considered calling yourself Vulgar-Vibrations? (Look it up). Because to be honest mate all I have ever seen from you is negative, un-constructive critisicm. Its fair enough if you don't like the tune, and I have no problem with you making that known. But to come in here and slag it off for a second time after the majority of people have disagreed with your original comment is simply un-proffesional and quite frankly pathetic, and i can garuntee that the majority of people, even if they didn't like the track originally and left constructive comments would agree!

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