WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JANUARY, 2011

[The Jaft]

overhauled the intro. levels yet again. took out the arppegiator. made the filtered noise sweep wayyy more subtle. brought the kick out. and i did a few other things, but i'm feeling a little lazy and dont want to type much more haha
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thanks everyone! you've been a massive help!

What no love guys? I only got one bit of feedback, so I'm going to pout until I get more

[Voodeedoo]

baha mine actually got no feedback; i'll just leave it here
i left feedback on my other post, tho.
[this is a concept i made in an hour, mind the shitty intro and whatnot but its still in the makes!]
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[sickozade]

@Nnny - Sounding pretty nice so far! Good sounds and stuff.
@Voodeedoo - Nice tune! i like the vibes of it
@Phenligth - Nice light tune, sounds good

Now for my tune... Its almost finished but would really appreciate some (constructive) criticism to point out anything that needs changing or tweaking.. as im hoping to get this one signed.

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Thanks guys!

[sqwuabblesmynig]

@billuf nice tunes man, i like the groove and feel in them, laidback type vibes, nice one!

@Voodeedoo not really my cup of tea, but i like what you did with it and i see where your going, pretty cool bass sound in there, and the intro is good with the nintendo sounds and all

@sickozade nice intro man, cool drop mang, i dig the basses as well, sound really good and crunchy, even tho im just hearing thru my crap laptop speakers. good stuff man, interested in the finished!

been working with the dsf sample pack for a few days, still super new so any feedback/comments are greatly appreciated, and the other is a tune in 320 i feel is finished, which would be my first (: comments on both would be dope, thanks everyone!

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[GeneralCracka_CA]

@sqwuabblesmynig
Hey there sqwua...bubble thing hahaha. The first tune you posted has some really vibes big up for that but there's probably a few pointers that I could give out. There's kind of a tone, a buzz behind your whole intro, it really bugs me like the sound that an old freezer would do. The vocals at the beginning are realllyyy nice but it should sort of stand out a bit more mixing wise. The other thing that I find about this tune (this work in progress) is that there's not really any type of correlation between the intro and the development. You could have easily gone in the best two-stepish kind of vibes with all the sound you had at the start (which would've made the most original fucked up song -> and that's a good thing). The kick could also be a lot cleaner, when I'm saying cleaner it's like just taking out unwanted frequencies out of it like a low cut at about 70hz.

For the second tune, it would be prime to spread your hit hats a bit to the left and the right as I feel that they are all hitting mono. Your bass sound could also be a little bit more crunchy and spreaded trough a "spreader". I just read that it's your first tune, very job overall for a first tune, I can definitely see the potential

@Voodeedoo

HAHAHA I like that tune. You definitely get a sort of 8 bit/mario country thing going on at the start very imaginative. Mix is good too, nice one even if it's not dubstep.


This is the tune I'm posting here, it's a 256kps ... don't know why I bounce it in that format but here you go :

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[sqwuabblesmynig]

@sqwuabblesmynig
Hey there sqwua...bubble thing hahaha. The first tune you posted has some really vibes big up for that but there's probably a few pointers that I could give out. There's kind of a tone, a buzz behind your whole intro, it really bugs me like the sound that an old freezer would do. The vocals at the beginning are realllyyy nice but it should sort of stand out a bit more mixing wise. The other thing that I find about this tune (this work in progress) is that there's not really any type of correlation between the intro and the development. You could have easily gone in the best two-stepish kind of vibes with all the sound you had at the start (which would've made the most original fucked up song -> and that's a good thing). The kick could also be a lot cleaner, when I'm saying cleaner it's like just taking out unwanted frequencies out of it like a low cut at about 70hz.

For the second tune, it would be prime to spread your hit hats a bit to the left and the right as I feel that they are all hitting mono. Your bass sound could also be a little bit more crunchy and spreaded trough a "spreader". I just read that it's your first tune, very job overall for a first tune, I can definitely see the potential

hahaha its like squa-wobble, got it from a nipsey hussle tune. thanks alot for the well detailed feedback man, i appreciate it tons! as far as the lil tone ima try to cut that out, but what i really want to know is what you had meant to adding a 2 steppish vibe to the intro, like adding my kick and snare? i will definitely work on the hi hats and the kick cuz i know what you mean. thanks again mang

real nice tune btw, diggin the groove/shuffle you got goin on, nice nice bass as well, would def like to hear it when finished g! cheers

[phenlight]

@Nnny - Sounding pretty nice so far! Good sounds and stuff.
@Voodeedoo - Nice tune! i like the vibes of it
@Phenligth - Nice light tune, sounds good

Now for my tune... Its almost finished but would really appreciate some (constructive) criticism to point out anything that needs changing or tweaking.. as im hoping to get this one signed.

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Thanks guys!

Hi i am liking this the only part that irritates me maybe at to higher level is at the beginning the part playing with the piano.

[phenlight]

@GeneralCracka_CA
In my opinion this is a great well produced tune love it

[Wigsplitta Beats]

hey guys im new to dubstepforum ! !

this is the first time i tried my hands at a drumstep dnb style track...maybe im in the wrong area but i just wanted some feedback or tips on my song..

one of my monitors took a shit on me so i had to mix this on my desktop speakers.

enjoy !

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[Cubicle]

@ GeneralCracka_CA
Intro seems like something really big is coming.
Can't seem to send alot of Sub nor bass or am I just going deaf?
Other then that, love how it got this little groovy piece in it.
The wobble it self is perfect, definitely my type of bass.

@Sqwuabblesmynig
Haha those vocals are genious, other synth seems a bit out of place tho.
Snare could use some beefing up, make it a bit phatter, but that's my personal feel.
Bassline itself could be a tad harder, reminds me of a Rusko style wobble, yet again a personal feel.

@Sickozade
That synth in the beginning agitates me, don't really know why.
Did you put your kickdrum together with your snare? Makes this really weird snare, not too fond of that.
Drop is big tho, really dark track.

@ Voodeedoo
Hahaha, Mario Bros on acid, lovely rythm stuck in my head already.
Sick drums, didn't expect that.
That piano fits in well, I personally would work around that piano.
Fucking rythm is stuck in my head.

@ nnny
Already loving your work.
nice atmosphere you got going there.
The rise is perfect, drums sound a bit repetitive but as you said, they'll get some tweaking.
That synth is amazing, really nice tune!

@ Ibscotty
Those hats are perfect, really feed on the emotion.
Expected a bit more bass at the drop tho but all in all a brilliant track.

@ Phenlight
Those sounds at that return every bar are so perfect, give the track a kind of hiphoppy feel.
Liking those vocals, sounding pretty dope!

@ NICORISONE
Those airy sounds are wonderfull.
That snare is so perfect gives so much to the track.
Not to fond of that sound at 0:53 tho.
Synth at second drop is really nice.

@ Billuf
Intro seems a bit full to me, I prefer my intro's almost completely empty.
Wow, honestly didn't expect that drop and those vocals.
Amazing sound!

@ Ninthy4
That intro made me expect some darkstep drop.
Vocals are a huge turnoff for me tbh, I really hate Lamb Of God.
Drop is huge tho! Guess those vocals fit well with it!

@ Eddymaw
I hear some clicking at that intro tho, something doesn't seem right.
Love that ducking synth and those hats coming up.
Not to fond of that intro at the beginning tho, I would completely delete it and get a new one (just a personal taste)



Lastly but not least, here is my latest work, honestly I think i completely fucked up on this one.
Considering I, for one, take my time to listen out everyone on the page that I'm posting on and also prodiving feedback where I can I would really appreciate it if I got something in return.
Take a listen, enjoy and give some constructive feedback if you please!

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[NICORISONE]

@Cubicle: Thanks for the feedback mate! For your track I am liking it but there are some things I personally think should be changed...
I like the lfo rate for the wobble at .27, at .34 I like the change in rate but I think it may be better if it stayed the same until the track actual gets started at .59. I think that from 1.00 to 1.03 that note change should be adjusted, doesn't sound right to me also the note around 1.07 seem like it should be changed to maybe lower? I really like what you did to the tone at 1.27 too. Nice tune, just some minor notes I think should be changed and I am not sure if it's because of soundclouds compression to 128kbps but the drums seem like they need some cleaning up on the higher end.

[nnny]

overhauled the intro. levels yet again. took out the arppegiator. made the filtered noise sweep wayyy more subtle. brought the kick out. and i did a few other things, but i'm feeling a little lazy and dont want to type much more haha
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thanks everyone! you've been a massive help!

What no love guys? I only got one bit of feedback, so I'm going to pout until I get more

I can't really see much to change, I like it. Sorry I can't offer anything constructive.
Downloadable?

[Wigsplitta Beats]

@NICORISONE - i love this track... i smoked a bowl and got lost for a few minutes..wouldnt change a thing.

@weedcali - i wasnt sure i liked the vocals with the clapping at the begining but after a few more listen's im into it.. i like the drop at 0:41 and the lead that comes in at 1:49 it transitions well into the second drop .very well put together and chilled out. drums dont sounds bad for stock fl sounds.

@ninthy4 - i dont like l.o.g. much but that sounds pretty ill.. nice and tech-ed out ... awsome sounds on all 3 of your songs.. nice production.

@billuf - the intro was alittle long.. but the drop with the portishead made up for it..

thats it for now.. ill get around to more later...

[waffleberry]

This is an older track, but im new to the forum, and most of what im upto these days is psytrance.
ideas on mixing/mastering. progression too slow, lost interest? buildup not effective? Any feedback would be sick!!!

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plur

[phenlight]

@Cubicle thx for your comments.
i need to say i like every thing in your tune apart from the wobble its sounds every where to me. bring vol down on them and not so fast lfo rates.
the backing is great.
only my opinion

[The Jaft]

overhauled the intro. levels yet again. took out the arppegiator. made the filtered noise sweep wayyy more subtle. brought the kick out. and i did a few other things, but i'm feeling a little lazy and dont want to type much more haha
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thanks everyone! you've been a massive help!

What no love guys? I only got one bit of feedback, so I'm going to pout until I get more

I can't really see much to change, I like it. Sorry I can't offer anything constructive.
Downloadable?

i could make this downloadable, i uploaded it as a 320, so come get it if you want it. thanks, it does feel pretty finished to me, only a few things i would really change at all.

[hyperianuk]

If your into Skrillex, 16bit, Skream, Nero, Breakage, Flux Pavillion, Chase & Status, Datsik, Joker

Let this Rip your head off!

lol made using Logic & various VSTi's, Leave some feedback if you have some opinions to share.

Add me on AIM if you wanna share some tracks too. @ hyperianuk

Big Up Dubbers
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[The Jaft]

overhauled the intro. levels yet again. took out the arppegiator. made the filtered noise sweep wayyy more subtle. brought the kick out. and i did a few other things, but i'm feeling a little lazy and dont want to type much more haha
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thanks everyone! you've been a massive help!

What no love guys? I only got one bit of feedback, so I'm going to pout until I get more

I can't really see much to change, I like it. Sorry I can't offer anything constructive.
Downloadable?

i could make this downloadable, i uploaded it as a 320, so come get it if you want it. thanks, it does feel pretty finished to me, only a few things i would really change at all.

forgot to add the new link
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[weedcali]

@weedcali - i wasnt sure i liked the vocals with the clapping at the begining but after a few more listen's im into it.. i like the drop at 0:41 and the lead that comes in at 1:49 it transitions well into the second drop .very well put together and chilled out. drums dont sounds bad for stock fl sounds.

thank you. are you talking about the track in my sig? that one isnt stock FL sounds.

This one is the track with stock FL sounds.
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[The Jaft]

If your into Skrillex, 16bit, Skream, Nero, Breakage, Flux Pavillion, Chase & Status, Datsik, Joker

Let this Rip your head off!

lol made using Logic & various VSTi's, Leave some feedback if you have some opinions to share.

Add me on AIM if you wanna share some tracks too. @ hyperianuk

Big Up Dubbers
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you have to give feedback to at least 3 people first man.