FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Post by SPEAKERLOUTS » Wed Jan 19, 2011 10:34 am

MUT3 wrote:@zonetrooper5: left comments on your soundcloud. You have nice soundscapes going on! Your tune Hope, the snare is huge and is definately the loudest thing in your mix. IDK if its cause of my speakers but they stick out loudly.

@reckstep: Oi blad wheres the wobbles mate!!!?! jk. I love your tune. The drum programming is sick.

@Jaft: you got a good thing going on but you need to bring down the synths and let your drums come through in the verse. build everything around them. getting the mixdown right is hard to do. The hi hats are pretty loud too.

@Ideate: Super sick. Cant critique this one very much. I love it

@Speakerlouts: would go down well in the club, i like the synth work



WOW THANKS BRO FOR YOUR KIND WORDS, YOU KNOW IT'S A FREE DOWNLOAD SO DOWNLOAD IT AND PLAY IT OUT LET US KNOW HOW IT GOES INIT. :e: :t:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Post by topmo3 » Wed Jan 19, 2011 11:41 am

sprayyypaint wrote:
topmo3 wrote:@DGZProductionz - the intro is that real classic old school dubstep. nice. lovely subs rollin there. great drums. with a little more of that "something special" this could easily be an old dub police release. take that any way you want :D

@willryan042 - a rather confusing track. i don't really like either the drums or the wobble. not really much else to say here, try to get better quality drum samples somewhere and work on the wobbles. you'll get there eventually.

@sprayyypaint - sorry mate, this one leaves me a bit puzzled. don't really know where you're going with this. that "yip" that goes on all the time is really a pain in the ass. mixing is good and the drumwork is decent but not really my thing.

@wizkeyzero - good work, the youtube quality doesn't really compliment your track but from what i can hear it's alright. as someone already stated, reminds me of a video game. the shouting samples sound a bit funny, are they yours?

here's my new tune. really don't know what it's all about, sort of an experimental ting. feedback would be great!

http://soundcloud.com/skuretracks/william-bell


why are you puzzled by it?? elaborate on that. and what do you mean where am i going with it?? you mean like a dance tune or a chill tune?? or what?? im just going for bass music if that makes any sense. haha.
thanks for all the other feedback tho.

feedback on ur track- sweet gltichy stuff man. i liek the slight offbeatness. are those strings a sample or a synth? i think the crackling might be sitting too far up front? it damn near feels like its too short ahahaha. good job tho i dig the track.
no man, i mean like as a song, at the first listen it sounded a bit weird and all sorts of things happened at the same time but now when i listen to it again it makes more sense. good work matey. and the subs are excellent, by the way :m:

don't you just hate it when people skip your track :( it's like, what's wrong? do they not like it. then just say it :i:
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Post by ideate » Wed Jan 19, 2011 12:22 pm

@MUT3 Thanks for the kind words man :)
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Post by meaden » Wed Jan 19, 2011 1:15 pm

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Post by Semihedonist » Wed Jan 19, 2011 2:31 pm

@ideate - negative cycles - sounds pro! even if i dont like this melodies in 100% i need to say that level of production is high! percussion is tight and everything sound correct! good job BTW your hiphop tune is very very good!

@mut3
- shy - interesting unique flow with melody - production level is nice. nice hihiats percussion flow! and no wobbles :D good job!

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Post by ideate » Wed Jan 19, 2011 2:42 pm

@Semihedonist I'm so grateful for you checking out my tracks and giving your opinions
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Post by KazaDubstep » Wed Jan 19, 2011 2:51 pm

Man it's been along time since i've hit up DSF :P

@ideate - "Negative Cycles" - Great percussion/drum work my friend... Big ups on that. Liked the vibe on that tune. Something i would def. use to creep around places with >=]

@meaden - "Lost Ones" - Interesting track :) Liked some of the synthesis on it, felt you could have braught out the highs on your bassline just a little more to give it some extra crispness, other than that i liked it!

Couple tracks in my sig due to release in a few months. Feel free to check em out, comment on them, whatever! Big ups steppas! >=]

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Post by ideate » Wed Jan 19, 2011 3:10 pm

@Kazadubstep Thanks for the kinds words mate, your tracks are completely awesome! I'm a massive fan of the transformers, robot malfunction, disgustingly heavy stuff. My other track might be more your type of thing - http://soundcloud.com/ideate/untitled-teaser
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Post by Estondo » Wed Jan 19, 2011 3:42 pm

@Debasser1-(Conjunction Malfunction) Sick tune man, big ups, some dank bass right there
@Cibiia-(Back To The Future) Dude this is badass, keep up the good work
@Noonyez-(Krikor) is this your first tune ever, if it is your on the right track, just keep doing what your doing
@Nyle-(Crawler) all i can say is dammm son, thats niceeeeeee
@Ideate-((Negative Cycles)(Untitled Teaser)) Shit man, sounds like you've been in this stuff for awhile, the intro for Negative Cycles is so sickkkkkkkkkk, but when u going to drop the full version of Untitled Teaser, cuz that is tightttttt

Now I believe its time for mine :W: So Cold is currently my Favorite
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Dancefloor Dubstepaaaaa
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Oldest up top newest on bottom,enjoy!
I also have 10 more finished tracks, -e- check em out at...

http://soundcloud.com/the_real_s-10
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Post by Skaven » Wed Jan 19, 2011 5:15 pm

@DGZProductionz - Alright man, I wasn't really keen on how the tune drops after the vocal, felt it should have dropped when the sample ends with the stab drum sound rather than hear that and then it dropped, just sounded a little strange to me and felt it would sound better kicking in on the stab sound of the sample after the vocal or put a delay or something at the end of the sample so it doesn't have that little gap? I do like the drop, but not really into the way its kind of 2bars, then a seperate 2 bars etc, just think it could do with something to help link them together better, so they don't sound so seperate if you get what I mean? Its good the way it is, just think its got potential to be better, and have more of an impact on the listener. As I said tho I do quite like it, and you have some real nice sounds going on, playing on my monitors today and the sub sounds sweet! Hope you get what I mean, just trying to give constructive feedback, not rtying to slate your tune in anyway, don't wanna sound like a dickhead, ha. anyway I hope it helps

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Post by coughdropz » Wed Jan 19, 2011 5:48 pm

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Post by Estondo » Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:19 pm

@coughdropz- Not sure if i'd call it dubstep, but im never a fan of vocals with dubstep, unless it's some rasta shit, nice work tho
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Post by coughdropz » Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:21 pm

haha, it was abit of a shady one for the dubstep forum...2 dnb mixes 2 dubs...

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Post by Estondo » Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:23 pm

@ coughdropz-its good none the less man, keep it up

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Post by coughdropz » Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:25 pm

thankyou for the love! :h:
you might prefer this...alot more dubby but i still finished on some dnb haha
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Post by Estondo » Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:29 pm

thats sicks, what DAW do you use?

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Post by coughdropz » Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:41 pm

Just VDJ, few noises made up from reason just for the mixes though. And once again, thanks for the appreciation haha!

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Post by coughdropz » Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:44 pm

and that dancefloor dubsteppa tune....
maaaaate...i'm fully lovin it...

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Post by KazaDubstep » Wed Jan 19, 2011 8:04 pm

ideate wrote:@Kazadubstep Thanks for the kinds words mate, your tracks are completely awesome! I'm a massive fan of the transformers, robot malfunction, disgustingly heavy stuff. My other track might be more your type of thing - http://soundcloud.com/ideate/untitled-teaser
Yea no problem, good work letting the music speak for itself :)

Checked out the other track and liked that as well. Think you could turn that into a pretty big drumstep VIP :6:

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Post by hyperianuk » Wed Jan 19, 2011 8:29 pm

@iDeate Your drums are top notch, definitely one of the better tracks i've heard on the forum. The only thing i could think of is maybe some variation with the bassline, but you could save that for a VIP remix or w.e

@Meaden The timing of your bass wobbles arent in sync mate, was struggling to groove along to it. also layer you bass's with some sub because the bottom end is a bit empty. your heading in the right direction though, keep workin on your sound

@KazaDubstep. Fucking awesome track, would definitely be asking the DJ for a reload. Big Up!

Would really appreciate some feed back on these cuts, 1st ones an original the other 2 are bootleg remix's, i'll post sum more feed back soon!

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