[Feedback] Pull me further (ft. Closer)

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[Feedback] Pull me further (ft. Closer)

Post by eta carinae » Fri Feb 04, 2011 9:46 pm

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Re: [Feedback] Pull me further (ft. Closer)

Post by faultier » Mon Feb 21, 2011 10:20 am

i like the overall feel of the track, with all the little ambiance sounds and incidentals

but i would suggest adding hihats/percs in there, as it is the beat sounds too much like "kick-snare-kick-snare-all-over-again"

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Re: [Feedback] Pull me further (ft. Closer)

Post by olly » Mon Feb 21, 2011 2:21 pm

i agree, the beat could maybe do with a bit more variation and mebs a bit more hats etc.

cool track tho, really ambient. the pads and vocals fit nicely together aswell!

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Re: [Feedback] Pull me further (ft. Closer)

Post by rhek » Mon Feb 21, 2011 2:47 pm

Pads/Rhodesy sounds are awesome. Reminds me of the Safe Room music in Resident Evil hehe - Which is good! Vocals are ok. They could do with some noticeable autotune. Could use some perc or more driving bass to push the track along. Found myself weaiting for a gushy bass riff to come through.

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Re: [Feedback] Pull me further (ft. Closer)

Post by darigan » Mon Feb 21, 2011 3:37 pm

really nice ambiance, and as been said before a bit more variation would help. I think the kick and snare sound well. The kicks got a real punch to it and snare/clap has a nice character but I think could do with a little bit more weight in it, sounds a little weak compared to the kick. Maybe try boosting around 200-250Hz, or layering it with a 909 snare band passed between 150-300 Hz if it needs it, because when it comes to EQ ya can't boost frequencies that aren't there in the first place
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