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melodium747
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by melodium747 » Thu Feb 24, 2011 6:05 am
Hey guys, I wanted to try to make something a little less harsh than I'm used to doing and making the track more chill. This was completely thrown together because I haven't had too much time to practice on production and probably wont until this weekend so I understand that this track may not be too great but I just wanted to know what yall thought. Any feedback would be great, I really appreciate it!
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faultier
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by faultier » Thu Feb 24, 2011 10:20 am
the track sounds rather empty, i reckon you could add some pads or atmosphere sounds to make it more lively, also i'm not sure about the wobbly synth, i dont think it fits, but i guess thats more personal opinion
also your kick is way too loud compared to the rest i think
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melodium747
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by melodium747 » Thu Feb 24, 2011 1:48 pm
your right, I did this when I was a little too tired ha but thanks for the feedback man I really appreciate it.
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HennoLV
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by HennoLV » Thu Feb 24, 2011 1:57 pm
couldn't agree more to dfaultuzr, track it self seems too empty and wobbling synth isn't really good for this. But don't need to add pads whatsoever. What you could do, is remove that wobbling and add various rather fast (like 4x tempo or what) percussion patterns from sliced loops with no low frequencies and slight reverb so they do some interesting stuff there and maybe some one-note string patterns somewhere
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melodium747
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by melodium747 » Thu Feb 24, 2011 1:58 pm
HennoLV wrote:couldn't agree more to dfaultuzr, track it self seems too empty and wobbling synth isn't really good for this. But don't need to add pads whatsoever. What you could do, is remove that wobbling and add various rather fast (like 4x tempo or what) percussion patterns from sliced loops with no low frequencies and slight reverb so they do some interesting stuff there and maybe some one-note string patterns somewhere
oh ok yeah thats a good idea. That would be pretty neat. Thanks.
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