WORK-IN-PROGRESS for March 2011

[hifi]

sorry legend4ry if your the one who originally posts this but it's that time again!

GIVE FEEDBACK TO 3 PEOPLE BEFORE YOU POST YOUR TRACK: THOSE WHO DON'T WILL NOT RECEIVE FEEDBACK!

heres my input I decided to do post this because ive been wanting to get feedback on this tune since i dont really have a clue what to do with it

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legend4ry i will not post this again just doin this once.

[jimbeaux]

@Hypefiend - good base for alot of layering. i like it.

been workin on this tune, it has yoi bass so bare with me... but the end gets pretty modulated...

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[Darkali]

I have left feedback on 3 Dubs in February as there's only 1 on here yet, when a few more are posted I will get back on and comment on everyone's soundclouds!!, I'm also at work and can't start banging out heavy bass etc! hopefully will be some more dubs on here when I get home then will get the Mackie's on and listen to all posts!!

Thanks in advance for any feedback on this one

Prodigal son aka Darkali

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[hifi]

yea i need to fix up a bunch of stuff today so will have a finished version tonight

[Malleus]

@Hypefeind
Production is top knotch man. Love that intro bass sweep. I feel that shit in my chest! Would love to hear a bit more meat in that wobble though. And I'm sure you're aware of the little spots where the timing clips. Keep it going, love to hear the final cut!

@jimbeaux
Love the feel of this track. I'm not big on formant yo bass unless done correctly and I feel like you're not using correctly but it is however better than what most people do with it. I love the composition of 2:00 and on. That shit is really good. The only issue I see is that I can tell you're using Massive preset patches because I've heard them before. You've got more talent than most people using them so do me a favor and work on those basses to make them your own. Just tweak and process them a little so they don't sound so identifiable. Hope that makes sense. Great tune otherwise!

@Darkali
I'm not big on the vocal but everything else sounds great. Very good production (though I think the whole track could stand to come up a bit in volume) and nice basses used.

And now that the March thread is up I can finally post this track I've been working on specifically for this month. I'm thinking of coming back to it later to maybe ad a switchup second measure drop in but I feel like this is solid as of right now. I'm happy with it. Let me know what you think.

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[hifi]

@Hypefeind
Production is top knotch man. Love that intro bass sweep. I feel that shit in my chest! Would love to hear a bit more meat in that wobble though. And I'm sure you're aware of the little spots where the timing clips. Keep it going, love to hear the final cut!

@jimbeaux
Love the feel of this track. I'm not big on formant yo bass unless done correctly and I feel like you're not using correctly but it is however better than what most people do with it. I love the composition of 2:00 and on. That shit is really good. The only issue I see is that I can tell you're using Massive preset patches because I've heard them before. You've got more talent than most people using them so do me a favor and work on those basses to make them your own. Just tweak and process them a little so they don't sound so identifiable. Hope that makes sense. Great tune otherwise!

@Darkali
I'm not big on the vocal but everything else sounds great. Very good production (though I think the whole track could stand to come up a bit in volume) and nice basses used.

And now that the March thread is up I can finally post this track I've been working on specifically for this month. I'm thinking of coming back to it later to maybe ad a switchup second measure drop in but I feel like this is solid as of right now. I'm happy with it. Let me know what you think.

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your intro is pretty sick man! likin the congas/congos whatever you want to call them ahah. and I tried beefing up that bassline im usin but i can't! aha i tried layering another bassline but the main vol would peak an extra 2dB and if I try making the sound fatter this annoying almost sub bass in the actual bassline will be audible and it's annoying as hell. that's the best i could do

[Malleus]

That's weird...what are you using for a synth? Have you tried EQing the basslines at different frequencies?

[deadly_habit]

http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=8&t=187097

[kebnoa]

good work lads keep them coming

[hifi]

http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=8&t=187097

I had this thread up before legend4ry posted that. And I've contacted him about it before you posted that as well, still waiting for a reply this will most likely be the last WIP feedback thread in the Production Sub-forum. The rest will be posted in the Dubs Sub-forum but thanks for the notification deadly. just so others viewing this may see that as well.

[hifi]

That's weird...what are you using for a synth? Have you tried EQing the basslines at different frequencies?

Yes I have, tried gettin rid of the lower frequencies and hi passin but still the more I cut the lows the less you will be able to hear the bassline. I have no idea what the problem is I have even tried using 2 EQ's (no pun intended *cough* kebnoa) by resampling it but to no avail. I love the sound but can't get rid of that annoying low freq buzzing sound. believe me I have tried different methods

[legend4ry]

Please use Dubs/Feedback section.