First track. Feedback greatly appreciated!

Atom-13 · Post by **Atom-13** » Wed Mar 16, 2011 11:03 pm

Thanks for any tech or artistic feed back. I'm just starting out. Thanks again.

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gorgon88 · Post by **gorgon88** » Wed Mar 16, 2011 11:12 pm

For your 1st track its got great sound and melodic values man ! I reckon a good delay with some reverb on the paino's with give it another texture and take it too another level , well done mate

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Atom-13 · Post by **Atom-13** » Thu Mar 17, 2011 12:45 am

gorgon88 wrote:For your 1st track its got great sound and melodic values man ! I reckon a good delay with some reverb on the paino's with give it another texture and take it too another level , well done mate

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thanks for the feedback man, I appreciate it!

I replied on your soundcloud. You've got some nice piano work on your tracks.

TheBrownie · Post by **TheBrownie** » Thu Mar 17, 2011 2:07 am

You have some great vocal samples, especially the one before the second drop. Personally I would have made the 2nd drop super fucking heavy, something the audience wouldn't have expected at all, leave them thinking about what just happened. Of course I'm not that good a producer since I'm just starting out, but those are just my thoughts about your track. Very, very well done piano work, really enjoyed it.

drew408 · Post by **drew408** » Thu Mar 17, 2011 8:13 am

Awesome brotha...loving the samples! Track needs to be mixed and you have something great!

wida_kim · Post by **wida_kim** » Thu Mar 17, 2011 11:53 am

I enjoyed that drop! obviously needs some work, but the foundation is there. I would suggest padding things out, have more going on, get a phatter sound. Don't be afriad of layering.

ninja edit! - I decided to follow you on soundcloud, hoping to hear some more decent stuff in the future!

Atom-13 · Post by **Atom-13** » Thu Mar 17, 2011 10:35 pm

TheBrownie wrote:You have some great vocal samples, especially the one before the second drop. Personally I would have made the 2nd drop super fucking heavy, something the audience wouldn't have expected at all, leave them thinking about what just happened. Of course I'm not that good a producer since I'm just starting out, but those are just my thoughts about your track. Very, very well done piano work, really enjoyed it.

Thanks man! Means a lot!

Atom-13 · Post by **Atom-13** » Thu Mar 17, 2011 10:36 pm

Big thanks to all you guys for taking the time to give it a listen. I'll be checking out all your tunes!

Atom-13 · Post by **Atom-13** » Thu Mar 17, 2011 10:42 pm

drew408 wrote:Awesome brotha...loving the samples! Track needs to be mixed and you have something great!

Thanks man! I'll be working on the mixdown

Any suggestions?

drew408 · Post by **drew408** » Thu Mar 17, 2011 11:08 pm

Panning the drums is a must. Some compression, little eq. Don't go heavy on the processing. Make sure nothing is clipping. and if two sounds are clashing together find out why, and use the necassary tools to fix it.

melodium747 · Post by **melodium747** » Thu Mar 17, 2011 11:17 pm

Shit dude is this really your 1st track? Damn I feel like an idiot cuz I've been at this for a few months now and I feel like none of the stuff I've done is nearly as good as this. Good job man! Keep it up!

Atom-13 · Post by **Atom-13** » Fri Mar 18, 2011 9:30 pm

melodium747 wrote:Shit dude is this really your 1st track? Damn I feel like an idiot cuz I've been at this for a few months now and I feel like none of the stuff I've done is nearly as good as this. Good job man! Keep it up!

Thanks man, I'm flattered! (I got kinda lucky with finding the samples, it just kinda put itself together)

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