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oldasadlo
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rajske zastupitelstvo - my first track, looking for feedback

Post by oldasadlo » Thu Mar 17, 2011 9:34 pm

hi, this is my first kind of harsh dubstepish attempt, gimme feedback please.
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Re: rajske zastupitelstvo - my first track, looking for feed

Post by drew408 » Thu Mar 17, 2011 9:53 pm

Chords on a pad are my personal way of setting the "mood" of a track. I don't feel emotion in this, just a bunch of synths. Play some chords with progession and it brings it to life.
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Re: rajske zastupitelstvo - my first track, looking for feed

Post by Body without Organs » Thu Mar 17, 2011 10:41 pm

it moves very slowly and sounds like youve got a very low bpm here, dubstep is usually around 140. could do with some tighter structuring as well, it's all very disjointed
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Re: rajske zastupitelstvo - my first track, looking for feed

Post by melodium747 » Thu Mar 17, 2011 11:22 pm

not a bad first attempt man. The only thing I would say is that it seem a little unorganized, like there are things come from all over the place kinda hurts the ears but don't get offended by that. Those are just my two cents :-) keep it up man I can tell your gonna get a lot better! :-)
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Re: rajske zastupitelstvo - my first track, looking for feed

Post by oldasadlo » Fri Mar 18, 2011 7:01 pm

thank you all, the advice about pad chords seems really valuable. and yes, tune is really too chaotic. crooked and unstable rhythms is what i personally seek in dubstep, but you certainly have to find some balance :)
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