NEW TO PRODUCING AND WOULD LIKE FEEDBACK PLZ

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I RECENTLY GOT REASON AND MADE MY FIRST DUBSTEP TRACK IT DIDENT TAKE ME TO LONG AND KEPT IT SIMPLE AND WENT ST8 IN WITH A HARD AND GRITTY SOUND, FEED BACK PLZ HERE OR ON MY LINK.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=comIQV1UASQ

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Hello and welcome to the world of producing !

I am going to be honest cause thats the first thing towards improving.

Firstly, loose the stupid vocals at the beginning. It's so cliche and they don't fit the song at all.
Secondly, where are your hi-hats and percussion?, a key essential to dubstep music !
Thirdly, find a better snare sample, it sounds awful.
Finally, have a look in the production bible for tips on song structure or start listening to more dubstep, but REALLY LISTEN. Generally dubstep has a 16/32 bar intro, then every 16 bars it tends to change a bit, then a break and so on for the second verse (y). But this is a generic rule.


I hope this helps.

Grace.