LESS IS WAR (WIP - NEED FEEDBACK!)

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dougriley
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LESS IS WAR (WIP - NEED FEEDBACK!)

Post by dougriley » Tue Mar 22, 2011 11:45 pm

Any help, as always, is greatly appreciated!

Feedback, comments, suggestions, etc is all welcome!

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Thanks for listening! :6:
Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing left to take away.
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Re: LESS IS WAR (WIP - NEED FEEDBACK!)

Post by eldoogle » Wed Mar 23, 2011 7:16 am

Starting at :13 with the drop, I wouldn't change the notes up as much. It might sound better as one note for awhile, crazier sounding. IMO melodys are best for the in between parts in bangers.
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Re: LESS IS WAR (WIP - NEED FEEDBACK!)

Post by buddstep » Wed Mar 23, 2011 8:44 am

work on crafting your synths more carfully, do some more filter work on that stab in the beginning
and slow down your effing wob wobs

diggin the percussion
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Re: LESS IS WAR (WIP - NEED FEEDBACK!)

Post by dougriley » Wed Mar 23, 2011 7:07 pm

Thanks for the feedback guys, truly appreciate it!

Here's the second version of the same track...

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All noises and sounds have no effects at this point, still trying to structure the whole tune...

I think I need to work on adding more low range frequency to the main sections and maybe vary the percussion a little, let me know what you guys think!

Thanks again! :6:
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