Chipped Tooth (Modernizing Retro Sounds)

[MultipleOrganizmz]

Here's a clip of my current work in progress. Any feedback greatly appreciated. Should I switch up the drums between parts or does it sound alright? How can I get the snare sounding better? Anything else? THANKS!
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[jrisreal]

Here's a clip of my current work in progress. Any feedback greatly appreciated. Should I switch up the drums between parts or does it sound alright? How can I get the snare sounding better? Anything else? THANKS!
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Using the modern talking osc on massive huh? lol I recognize that without even having massive. Well as for the snare, you could add eq to boost the midrange on it so its fatter. Also the bass needs to be more midrange too so do some eq on that also. And the intro clashes a bit (the sound that sounds like a videogame is clashing frequencies with the notes played.) Other than these though, its not bad man good work

EDIT: On the bass, it also needs reduction on the sub bass AND a boost in the mids...just experiment and find something that sounds good.

[MultipleOrganizmz]

Alright, I've played with the EQ a bit played it on a couple different systems and I think I got it sounding better. I also changed the sounds a bit. A little less generic perhaps? Let me know what you think. Thanks!

[MultipleOrganizmz]

Soundcloudhi all. i've play4e around with this some more. please give it a listen and let me know what you think about the mix down; what to turn down/up. thanks!