OSaka - Blue Lotus [Instrumental hip-hop]

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oscarhenson
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OSaka - Blue Lotus [Instrumental hip-hop]

Post by oscarhenson » Sun Mar 27, 2011 7:44 pm

Decided to take a little break from producing dubstep and started focusing properly on beats on more of a hip hop tip (think J Dilla, Odd Future, Tribe, FlyLo sort of stuff)

Finished first tune today, let me know what you think, feedback would be really appreciated. could put it up for download if you're feeling it
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Re: OSaka - Blue Lotus [Instrumental hip-hop]

Post by continuumdnb » Mon Mar 28, 2011 10:33 pm

I really don't like that kick drum, but the rest of the tune has a nice atmosphere to it. It feels like it'd work much better at a slower tempo though, possibly even as a downtempo track. Please consider just taking a bit off the bpm, and possibly stripping down the drums slightly. There's a lot of potential in this.
goodeh wrote: is that good? cause it was accidental, i just copied the drum midi clip and pasted it into the bass channel....
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