NEW TRACK!!! ELECTRO/DANCE/DUBSTEP!!! [FEEDBACK!!]

[LkBeatz]

new track i made, its not mixed at all, just wondering about the overall track and what the community thinks about it. THANKS. DJ LK
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[OGP]

yeah its good, the mixing isn't bad at all. Maybe the structure could do with some work/rearranging - as it is the build ups seem a bit confused. ALso maybe try to get more percussion goin, particularly in the bits where it goes down to half tempo, this would keep the groove going and drive the song forward more, overall great work though

[LkBeatz]

Thanks.

[LkBeatz]

yeah its good, the mixing isn't bad at all. Maybe the structure could do with some work/rearranging - as it is the build ups seem a bit confused. ALso maybe try to get more percussion goin, particularly in the bits where it goes down to half tempo, this would keep the groove going and drive the song forward more, overall great work though

Thanks. I dont know what you mean by the build ups seem a bit confused? :/ If you could explain that a little more it would be much appreciated. Thanks for the feedback also, I just got battery and will see what other percussion sounds i can through into the half tempo parts. But i listened to your track and I see what you mean by having the percussions drive the song forward. I enjoyed your track and especially for some reason loved the mix. I thought the intro sounded very tight and felt like you used the whole range from left to right speaker "GJ". - Dj LK.



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[OGP]

yeah its good, the mixing isn't bad at all. Maybe the structure could do with some work/rearranging - as it is the build ups seem a bit confused. ALso maybe try to get more percussion goin, particularly in the bits where it goes down to half tempo, this would keep the groove going and drive the song forward more, overall great work though

Thanks. I dont know what you mean by the build ups seem a bit confused? :/ If you could explain that a little more it would be much appreciated. Thanks for the feedback also, I just got battery and will see what other percussion sounds i can through into the half tempo parts. But i listened to your track and I see what you mean by having the percussions drive the song forward. I enjoyed your track and especially for some reason loved the mix. I thought the intro sounded very tight and felt like you used the whole range from left to right speaker "GJ". - Dj LK.



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Well the track seems to be pretty firmly rooted in genre, as you say in the title; electro, and I think music in this genre is generally made for the primary purpose of being mixed by a DJ (although of course you might have made it for different purposes etc). I think that this primary purpose dictates the structure of electro music to a large extent as songs that consist of 16 and 32 bar phrases are generally easier to mix together. So what I meant was that the build ups seems to act more as autonomous sections rather than inherent parts of 16 or 32 bar phrases which to me made them feel a little confused, but if you wanted it that way then that's fine, like I said its a great track overall, I think the main thing is just adding some more percussion