REALLY NEED SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM :0

[Blastfome]

Hey everyone. Just wanted to throw this new track up that I just made. I'm only 19 and this is my 2nd track that I would call legit. Just workin on finding my sound and keeping the listener's attention. I really would love feedback on what you like and what I should try to focus on more. I'm trying to improve! Thanks in advance P.S. It's the first track of course. Not the one in my sig.

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[bv]

i think its a real good start man i personally would have some sub bass on the track and make it sound full. it sounds very bland but like i said this is a very good start to the song man keep it up
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[Blastfome]

Thanks man. Yea, i've been listenin to a lot of dubstep artists lately and i've noticed I can always manage to hear subass in some way So i'm definately gunna start adding itto my tunes. Thanks for the advice bro!

[continuumdnb]

some nice ideas here, i like the quick delay on the vocals. As previously mentioned you could do with a lot more low end on your synths. I don't think it's just subbass you need though (which is generally a sine wave in the 40-80hz range) but some sort of more-bassy synth an octave or two lower than your primary one will help the song sound a bit more full.

[Nickelwound]

Id say progressions... you know, chord changes and stuff, maybe a build up. But then again im not really an expert into the soundscaping of a production, so yeah that was my two cents, I thought it sounded nice, especially if its your second track. All I can say is keep making tracks man :].

[Blastfome]

Thanks guys! Love th advice. I'm starting to realize that sub bass can be the key to success...

[FuhNetIk]

MOAR SYNTHS AND WOBBLEZ -

Joking aside, loved the intro, I would try to add more variation, your vowel sounding bass is really good, but i'd personally try to throw more in there. Also learn to <3 the subs

[FuhNetIk]

MOAR SYNTHS AND WOBBLEZ -

Joking aside, loved the intro, I would try to add more variation, your vowel sounding bass is really good, but i'd personally try to throw more in there. Also learn to <3 the subs

[Blastfome]

haha, alrighty, thanks! Can anyone give my some tips on how to make GOOD sub bass? I've made decent stuff, but it sounds to much like noise. I just want massive hidden bass! lol

[continuumdnb]

RE: sub bass:

(which is generally a sine wave in the 40-80hz range) .

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Your clap and snare are panned a bit too hard to each side as well, the listener shouldn't really be able to separate them.