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alexolmer
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My First Release

Post by alexolmer » Mon Mar 28, 2011 6:12 pm

Hey all, this is my first track.
Created with Reason 5 (rewired into Ableton).
Pretty Simple. Any feedback, positive or negative,
would be GREATLY appreciated.

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wub wrote:I just make electronic sounds. If it turns out to be one genre or another, then so be it.
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Re: My First Release

Post by Nickelwound » Mon Mar 28, 2011 8:28 pm

Nice dark edge to it, thought the percussion thingy (ride or something) was maybe too cheery for it? But other than that, solid track!
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Re: My First Release

Post by alexolmer » Mon Mar 28, 2011 8:48 pm

Nickelwound wrote:Nice dark edge to it, thought the percussion thingy (ride or something) was maybe too cheery for it? But other than that, solid track!
Agreed. At that point i was just trying to add some variety to the drum pattern,
so its whatever. Appreciate the feedback, thanks man!
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Re: My First Release

Post by Nickelwound » Mon Mar 28, 2011 8:51 pm

alexolmer wrote:
Nickelwound wrote:Nice dark edge to it, thought the percussion thingy (ride or something) was maybe too cheery for it? But other than that, solid track!
Agreed. At that point i was just trying to add some variety to the drum pattern,
so its whatever. Appreciate the feedback, thanks man!
I get that man, watching real drummers can help man, plenty of vids on youtube out there, also for dubstep btw. May the Wobble be with you.
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