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S1NTH3TIC
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New producer - Feedback and criticism please

Post by S1NTH3TIC » Thu Mar 31, 2011 6:31 pm

I've only been doing electronic producing for a few months, here's the first track I"m proud of
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Any feedback would be greatly appreciated
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Re: New producer - Feedback and criticism please

Post by XeniK » Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:08 pm

hi dude...

probs for ur first production...
shure u have to workin´on

greetz :t:

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Re: New producer - Feedback and criticism please

Post by skXch » Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:18 pm

you need more drums man

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Re: New producer - Feedback and criticism please

Post by Mr Chubbs » Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:29 pm

Throw some drums in there and your on your way mate...

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Re: New producer - Feedback and criticism please

Post by S1NTH3TIC » Fri Apr 01, 2011 2:00 am

Thanks for the replies!

Yeah I'm pretty weak with drums, thats what I"m trying to work on the most. Thanks again for the feedback!
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Re: New producer - Feedback and criticism please

Post by Hedorah » Fri Apr 01, 2011 2:48 am

I feel u there man, drums are the hardest part of a track to get right for me too.

Like everyone else says, get a few snares etc in there and it would be a cool track. Look forward to hearing the finished version :)
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Re: New producer - Feedback and criticism please

Post by WeaponsOfExpression » Fri Apr 01, 2011 3:25 am

Wheres the snare!
Cool for your first project, keep at it.
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Re: New producer - Feedback and criticism please

Post by PR1NCE » Fri Apr 01, 2011 6:37 am

wheres the hi hats lol !!!

keep practicing.. watch tutorials.. nice
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Re: New producer - Feedback and criticism please

Post by S1NTH3TIC » Tue Apr 05, 2011 3:10 am

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so do you guys think I'm moving in the right direction?
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Re: New producer - Feedback and criticism please

Post by Abdukted » Tue Apr 05, 2011 4:14 am

Good thing you got the woobles down! If I have any tip to give is to keep makin new tracks and push your limits by trying something completely new every time. You should be able to keep track of your progress. Then after a while you make one song that assembles all the good things you discovered while messing around. Never keep using the same sounds/techniques over and over again in each new song cauz youll stagnate. Cheers. Track ain't bad but you still have a lot to learn. One thing at a time is key.

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Re: New producer - Feedback and criticism please

Post by S1NTH3TIC » Tue May 10, 2011 11:00 pm

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Finished up all the drums and changed the structure just a touch.

Criticism on the track please?
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Re: New producer - Feedback and criticism please

Post by Atom-13 » Wed May 11, 2011 1:03 am

So, drums aren't as hard as they may seem. Set up a four bar loop, put a kick on the first beat of every bar, and a snare on the third beat of every bar. Now add a high hat on every eighth note. Now you've got a very basic dubstep drum track. Don't go to crazy with the snares, but feel free to add some extra kicks in there to taste. Try that and see what you think. Also remember that most all dubstep is around 140 bpm.

Mainly, just keep making music man! Your on the right track!


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