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fred8785
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by fred8785 » Tue Apr 05, 2011 5:06 am
I've Got some good feedback from my friends (their not producers), so i would really appreciate some feedback from more discerning ears

Thank you very much!
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fred8785
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by fred8785 » Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:26 pm
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kaiori breathe
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by kaiori breathe » Tue Apr 05, 2011 11:06 pm
Yea man, it's not bad at all, kinda got a strange indie vibe to it which is quite nice, and it's a little different to what I usually hear here, nice guitar work, the clean tone you're using on it is quite nice, the distorted parts I think are a little grainy by comparison, I'd lace the guitar parts with lots of reverb to make them really stand out and feel more included in the mix, but other than that I think this is really quite good and original. Props. Nice production too.
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Astrobear
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by Astrobear » Wed Apr 06, 2011 1:57 am
I think I hear some things out of tune at different parts of the song, like the bass. Were you using an electric bass? It sounded a bit out of tune on one fret.
I liked the vibe you were going for.
It was a tad bit reppetetive
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fred8785
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by fred8785 » Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:13 pm
Thanks so much for the feedback! Ill definitely play around with some reverb on the guitar and maybe the tone of the lead.
Im pretty sure the bass is in tune... no electric bass, its a soft synth and all the notes are right... but ill take a closer listen.
Thank You!!
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