Need some feed back on this tune.

[Chinch]

I've been away from the computer a long time. Finally found the time to do a lil work. Just wondering what you guys thought of this tune im working on. Please leave your positive\negative feedback! I had to mix it on head phones, so the mix is prolly off. Thanks in advance!!!


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[TheSoup]

the intro is pretty tight and i like the vocal sample... the main thing that i really dont like is how out of tune the bass is. if you just get it in tune with the strings and whatnot, this could be a really good tune. also, you might work on giving it a bit more of a drop, and shortening the intro some. otherwise, nice one!

[Chinch]

the intro is pretty tight and i like the vocal sample... the main thing that i really dont like is how out of tune the bass is. if you just get it in tune with the strings and whatnot, this could be a really good tune. also, you might work on giving it a bit more of a drop, and shortening the intro some. otherwise, nice one!

Thanks alot for the feedback!!!

Do you think im using the wrong midi notes, or do you think the bass is just too out of tune in massive?

Thanks again!!!

[TheSoup]

the intro is pretty tight and i like the vocal sample... the main thing that i really dont like is how out of tune the bass is. if you just get it in tune with the strings and whatnot, this could be a really good tune. also, you might work on giving it a bit more of a drop, and shortening the intro some. otherwise, nice one!

Thanks alot for the feedback!!!

Do you think im using the wrong midi notes, or do you think the bass is just too out of tune in massive?

Thanks again!!!

i think the midi notes themselves are wrong, cuz even the low end sounds out of tune. i would try moving the bass part around until it sounds more in tune with the other parts.

no problem man

[Chinch]

the intro is pretty tight and i like the vocal sample... the main thing that i really dont like is how out of tune the bass is. if you just get it in tune with the strings and whatnot, this could be a really good tune. also, you might work on giving it a bit more of a drop, and shortening the intro some. otherwise, nice one!

Thanks alot for the feedback!!!

Do you think im using the wrong midi notes, or do you think the bass is just too out of tune in massive?

Thanks again!!!

i think the midi notes themselves are wrong, cuz even the low end sounds out of tune. i would try moving the bass part around until it sounds more in tune with the other parts.

no problem man

Cool, thanks for the feedback!!! Your tracks are clean, good work!

[sub-life]

that intro was tight !

[Chinch]

that intro was tight !

Thanks brother!

That tune in you sig is dark, Im feelin the piano sample (or whatever that is)

[WeaponsOfExpression]

the intro is pretty tight and i like the vocal sample... the main thing that i really dont like is how out of tune the bass is. if you just get it in tune with the strings and whatnot, this could be a really good tune. also, you might work on giving it a bit more of a drop, and shortening the intro some. otherwise, nice one!

I agree with the tuning of the bass.
i can dig the intro, didnt see the Cutting Crew coming, but i like it!

[Chinch]

the intro is pretty tight and i like the vocal sample... the main thing that i really dont like is how out of tune the bass is. if you just get it in tune with the strings and whatnot, this could be a really good tune. also, you might work on giving it a bit more of a drop, and shortening the intro some. otherwise, nice one!

I agree with the tuning of the bass.
i can dig the intro, didnt see the Cutting Crew coming, but i like it!

Thanks for the feed back man!!!

Im gunna move the bass notes around and try to get them into the same key as the sample.


Anyone know alot about music, What notes are being played in the intro?