Amateur needing feedback- Luigi's Mansion

[sexified]

I'm somewhat intimidated to post anything in this forum because every song I've looked at sounds so good. You guys know your shit.

Anyways, I figure the only way to get better is to get some feedback/criticism.
Soundcloud
http://soundcloud.com/bourgeoisie-super ... is-mansion

Thanks guys!

[Reroute]

I'm also new at this lol, know exactly what you mean.
I liked the track, liked what you did around 2:14 I'd try to put in something more heavy but that's just me, but it's a perfect tune for a laid back evening

Would you mind listening to my first piece too? It's a "remix" of the NCIS theme

Soundcloud

[Monstro]

I would try to throw down some harder sounds and maybe some louder drums plus more variation in your wobbles, good try, pm me and tell me what programs you use and maybe I can help point you in the right direction.

Feedback for feedback?

http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=192829