[FEEDBACK] PaddyG - First mixdown EVER

[PaddyG]

http://soundcloud.com/reindeer/sumfin-innit


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*Edit: With some of the feedback I got below I decided to do a completely new tune, hopefully better than the last haha

Not sure if I should finish it, wasn't clipping at all.

Gonna be focusing on production the next little while, need to figure some stuff out (obviously)

Feedback appreciated, i'll hit up some tracks on this board.


Peace

[jonnybouta]

Diggin the sub bass on it, def would love to hear a little more melody maybe add some synth melodies but thats me. Not bad for your first dub track.

[PaddyG]

Thanks for the quick reply!

Yeah I was thinkin the same thing making it, but i only spent a few hours on er.

I need to get synthesis pegged down before I put any serious time into a track.

Cheers jonny

[Sparxy]

For a first tune/mixdown that is excellent. Everything has it's space in the mix and its technically sound. All I would say, is maybe the kicks need more impact. Maybe try layering them and adding effects on different layers. Possibly do similar things with the snare to make it more dynamic. Maybe bring the wobbles onto your sub so it moves with your mids too. Think about progression in the tune too maybe.

Seriously think i'm being a dick though, the tune is decent especially if its your first so just keep making tunes, you'll get better with each one you will make better synth patches all the time and they will sculpt the vibes of your tunes

[PaddyG]

Thanks for the feedback! Scrapped the last one, and whipped this one up today.