Iarba&Laura-T01 DUBSTEP ROMANIA

[iarbardv]

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NEW TUNE IARBA LAURA DUBSTEP ROMANIA...SOME FEEDBACK!

[OGP]

not bad, that melody/strings part is nice, and the vocal sample sounds cool. The wobble doesn't sound good, probably get rid of it. Overall it is a bit sparse, percussion consists of only 3 'out of the box' hits. melody isn't countered by anything. I think what you have here is a practice exercise from which you can take certain elements (vocal sample, melody) and put them into something new with more intricate percussion, some nice sub etc

[iarbardv]

tnx for your time!

[TheSoup]

im liking the intro, but it definitely needs to be shorter. also, i wouldnt have the drums come back in before the drop after they cut out. i like the wobble sound, but the whole bass riff in the beginning is a half-step to high. try lowering it a half-step, youll see what i mean. another thing, is i would flesh out the drums a little more with some hihat, and maybe had a heavier snare... good start though, all it needs is a few adjustments and some mixing. nice work!

[iarbardv]

yea the drums need something ...some friend also told this to me...they are kinda simple...tnx for your time and advice!

[iarbardv]

bump!