[WIP] PaddyG - Untitled ~≈Feedback Returned≈~

[PaddyG]

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I'll gladly give feedback for feedback. Give it to me straight people

This is a rough mixdown of my latest track, still need to do some EQing and tweaking of effects and the like.

http://soundcloud.com/reindeer/rough-mi ... titled-wip

Hope you enjoy what I have finished so far. I am quite new at this so don't expect perfection! This is only my third mixdown, however, I'm improving on each new tune I do. This is my favorite track I've done so far (personally of course).

Peace.

[PaddyG]

I'm just gonna leave this here…

And I'm serious about returning feedback.

[Kes-Es]

I think this is dope, percussion is on point, sub is nice, I'd maybe cut some of the highs out of your yoi or cut it out all together, it's cool but it doesn't fit as is. You've got some nice filtering and bass sounds going on but that yoi is louder than the really really cool lower basses I can hear in here.

Sub is proper heavy, second drum passage is cool, drop hits hard I'd say throw a little bit of reverb on your drums so they fit the mix, do something with the yois, and you'll have a really really good tune no doubt. I love this though.
Big ups man.

[PaddyG]

I'd maybe cut some of the highs out of your yoi or cut it out all together, it's cool but it doesn't fit as is.

Funny thing is that was the synth I had the most trouble mixing in! Either hear it loud or it's wayyyy in the back of the mix. If it doesn't fit by my next mixdown i'll drop it fo sho.

I'll try some of the things you mentioned, thanks!

[PaddyG]

shameless bump

[anotherday]

the intro kinda seems a bit drawn out to me, once the drum comes in it sounds nice. As for the person talking about the Yoi synth, I think the volume and eq is fine, but the rhythm and timing of it could be changed to make it fit more. As it is right now it doesn't feel connected to anything else but if you did something like a fill or transition it could sound better. Otherwise your mixdown sounds good

feedback?
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