Amiran - Two tracks of Electro/Dubstep

[amiran]

Hello, I'm new here and wanted to share my two tracks I just recently made, both originals. Enjoy and comment if you like.

Amiran - Stunned Oracle
Soundcloud

Amiran - Get Drunk and Smash a Bottle
Soundcloud

[Monstro]

They both seem a little confused to me, not in arrangement, but I dont think the filth has enough room to breathe or enough treble, I think maybe the sub is eating up too much headroom, and the drums dont punch through enough. Maybe everything is clasing? My suggestion is to get a sprectrum analyzer and figure out where to fundamentals of each track sit and figure out which things you want to DOMINATE each specific freq. and go from there. All in all they have the potential to be bangers, just need some polish.

Feedback for feedback?

http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=197474

[amiran]

Thanks for the feedback! Yes, the tracks might seem to be very confusing, but I come from a progressive/technical/math metal background where such things are welcome. You're right about the mastering, I'm slowly getting into it. Some weeks ago I didn't even know I had to cut the low bass off all other instruments to let the sub-bass breathe.