Iorek - Akira Tribute [dubstep]

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Iorek
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Iorek - Akira Tribute [dubstep]

Post by Iorek » Thu May 19, 2011 1:49 am

Something I've been working on like to hear what you all think :)
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Re: Iorek - Akira Tribute [dubstep]

Post by MedikProductions » Thu May 19, 2011 2:17 am

my thoughts - that main wobble you're using loses it's effect since you've spaced it out so much. unless you're going for more of a minimalistic approach i think you should keep it center to make it heavier. also one trick i like to do is duplicate your wobble and match the pitch an octave higher or lower and maybe change the effect. the wobble at the drop in my sig at 1:29 is actually 4 different wobbles (all the same) layered with different effects at 2 different octaves. just a couple idearz http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=199663 lemme know what you think bout mine ;]
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Re: Iorek - Akira Tribute [dubstep]

Post by deranger » Thu May 19, 2011 6:16 am

Intro is fairly weird and scary. It's a bit off putting. The intro goes on too long. The drop is strange. It seems disconnected from the intro. The drums are weak. The wobble is ok. The feel is kinda confusing. It's sorta lounge, but the bass somewhat aggressive. I hear what you were trying to do, it just didn't quite work out. Overall the production needs some work. The drums could be worked on for sure. Also, the mix is a little off. The different elements aren't blending, they seen to be fighting each other for my attention.

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Re: Iorek - Akira Tribute [dubstep]

Post by Iorek » Thu May 19, 2011 1:49 pm

Thanks for everyones input

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Re: Iorek - Akira Tribute [dubstep]

Post by ARTFX » Thu May 19, 2011 2:00 pm

Yeahh mate work out those drums a bit more, also some more processing on the bass wouldn't do it any bad I think.
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