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Marrow Machines
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Chill Dubstep

Post by Marrow Machines » Sat May 28, 2011 1:37 pm

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Would like feedback, and not sugar coated.

hutyluty
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Re: Chill Dubstep

Post by hutyluty » Sat May 28, 2011 2:04 pm

the extended synth is good in the intro. I don't think you should introduce the snare or the midrangey bass until after the drop, especially as extended it sounds pretty horrible. I think the synth should stay in until the cymbal crash as when it disappears it kind of leaves a hole in the mix- it suddenly goes a lot quieter.

Don't think the cymbals on every beat works very well either- kind of clutters it up with highs. I think maybe you could do with some chopped up vocals above it aswell to give it some more interest- maybe a bit more eq on the mid range bass too, cut out some of the lows from it

I've tried not to be sugar coated- but its a pretty good song haha, so it was hard- big ups
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Marrow Machines
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Re: Chill Dubstep

Post by Marrow Machines » Mon May 30, 2011 2:53 am

Thank you good sir, i appreciate your honesty and your love.

Something to chew on next time ;)

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