Organik - Got a hold on me

[Docka]

New beat up on the soundcloud. Let me know if your feeling the vibes.

Soundcloud

[davwuh]

the jazzy chords are sweet but the vocals need to be worked into the track more, atm it just sounds like u've randomly pasted "float float float" all over it, doesn't really fit.. try and vary them a bit, maybe have them a little more sparse + use some effects here and there, maybe a bit of reverb and delay just to make them sound a bit different

[davwuh]

don't wanna sound like i'm bein negative though cause i really like the tune otherwise..

[Docka]

Not at all man - thanks for the listen and feedback. Point taken regarding the vox, reuploaded a new version which hopefully has the samples arranged better with more variety...atleast you picked out 'float' though. I was worried for a time (after many repeated listens) that the vox stabs were saying 'boat/coat/goat' etc.

[davwuh]

lol yeah, when you listen to something long enough it begins to evolve in your mind