4 Strings - Take me Away Drumstep & Bass RMX PLEASE POST

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Pred3
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4 Strings - Take me Away Drumstep & Bass RMX PLEASE POST

Post by Pred3 » Mon Jun 13, 2011 10:06 pm

Hello friends, WIP i started a few months ago and i just recently decided to actually put some work in on it.

Things i'd like feedback on specifically -- Better structure, Drum patters, and Wobble Riddems. Also i really want to clean up the build ups, and make them bigger. I really havent decided what i want to do with structure, there really arent any breaks between bass longer than 8 bars, it would be pretty easy to move around my phrases though. Thanks for listening guys, BIG UPS! LATE. :4:

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Re: 4 Strings - Take me Away Drumstep & Bass RMX PLEASE POST

Post by Pred3 » Tue Jun 14, 2011 1:14 am

lol bump. 3 Views is pretty sad

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Re: 4 Strings - Take me Away Drumstep & Bass RMX PLEASE POST

Post by ElSonido » Tue Jun 14, 2011 1:40 am

I really like the intro and the second section (1:30 - 2 ish). But it's got a confused vibe going on. It could have a wonderful, deep floaty feel if you knock the treble off the kick or use a minimal house kick sample and get rid of that wobble. Or take the midrange out.

But I think you've created a winner somewhere in there.
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Pred3
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Re: 4 Strings - Take me Away Drumstep & Bass RMX PLEASE POST

Post by Pred3 » Tue Jun 14, 2011 3:47 am

Yes, i understand what you mean by the confused vibe. I've been fighting trying to make the mid section wobbles fit in with the rest of my mixdown but i cant seem to synthesize it.

This track definitely has both minimal and brostepish vibe melded into one and its very conflicting, but its intentional.

Thanks for the good feedback, more please!

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Re: 4 Strings - Take me Away Drumstep & Bass RMX PLEASE POST

Post by Pred3 » Tue Jun 14, 2011 9:16 pm

Fishin' for some feedbacks/comments on da cloud plox friends bumpitybumpbumpbump

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Re: 4 Strings - Take me Away Drumstep & Bass RMX PLEASE POST

Post by whoatommy » Tue Jun 14, 2011 9:20 pm

Kick and Snare def needs some work. Snare sounds kinda generic....more depth on the kick, maybe sidechain that bass

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