future garage tune in hospital records democast

[DJWinnie]

would love some thoughts for this future garage tune, it got featured in the june hospital demo cast

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Ollie

[rhek]

Really nice movements, tune progresses real well. Glad I stuck on it for the second drop too! Excellent switch-up. Transition into the second breakdown should be smoother. Bit more automation on the build-up/build-down. Not 100% on the crunchy sound that comes in on the second breakdown, takes away from the tune in my oppinion. Everything up to the second breakdown is fucking Mint, should get released. Just work on the sections after that. Instead of adding more sounds work on automating and warping edits witht he sounds you already got up to that point.

Proper good mate!

[Shum]

First of all, this tune is absolute class and you should certainly look for a release.

Now for my somewhat irrelevant opinions, mostly concerned with the arrangement:

Drums should be your intro, with your synth rising into the mix, that rhythm is too good to leave it out for so long.
The piano sound in your switch up needs to be turned up in the mix to really dominate that middle section, more edits, spot delays, etc would also add a bit more spice.
That said, the switch up is magnificent and should be lengthened by 4 bars or so at the expense of the second breakdown, your acidy synth needs to come in a little bit later into the mix as well.
That acidy melody needs to be transposed down, it would serve the song better as a counterpoint to your other synth melody. This should be at the expense of your melody that comes in 16 bars before the outro.
A few of those incidental samples should be scattered at the outro of your song as well, stuff like that is really good to mix out of.

Best thing I've heard around here for a long long time, hopefully this sees wax.

[DJWinnie]

thanks so much for the feedback people, I really want this tune to be polished well if you know what I mean. I shall post results at a later date

[TecBloc]

Crisp.... Very nice indeed.

[agus69]

Yea man! wicked tune, this! I'm only listening on my laptop, so I can't really hear the dynamic of the song. Somethings jump out and others sound buried. That said, your mix "faux pas" could be used creatively and to your advantage, adding that little bit of originality within your chosen sounds. All the sounds that are there, sound great together. I wouldn't change anything, but I would give the mix a once over.

Excellent work, brah

[charleswpeck]

Dear God mate, this is a beautiful track!

[DJWinnie]

Yea man! wicked tune, this! I'm only listening on my laptop, so I can't really hear the dynamic of the song. Somethings jump out and others sound buried. That said, your mix "faux pas" could be used creatively and to your advantage, adding that little bit of originality within your chosen sounds. All the sounds that are there, sound great together. I wouldn't change anything, but I would give the mix a once over.

Excellent work, brah

I was thinking a couple of the pads could do with some layering, is that the kind of thing you had in mind?

[LA_Boxers]

Yep fucking love this one mate. Proper lovely track.

Personally I think the snare after the first breakdown could have a bit more attack.....seems a little off beat to me. Just a touch off.Apart from that really liking it mate. Keep us update about any release/possible 320 please.

[DJWinnie]

by the way I'm looking to trade tunes with anyone interested

let me know if I can hit you up on aim/skype or whatever


peace