Ashanti Dubstep Remix

[JDILLA]

Hey guys, I'm pretty new to dubstep but I've been producing music for years. Let me know what you think of this, any constructive criticism is appreciated.

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[JDILLA]

bump, come on any constructive criticism? Two of my friends said to drop the delayed high pitched vocal hits, but I want more opinions please

[davwuh]

turn the bass down an octave on the drop.. get rid of that delay sound before the drop hits, or notch it up or down a tone til it's in key cause it's really outta key.. also, the way the wobble ends after each 4 bars and starts again doesn't flow, try and connect them if you know what i mean..

good tune though, has potential & the mixdown is decent

[JDILLA]

alright I dropped one of the oscillators an octave and it REALLY thickens up the bass, so thanks for that! yeah I was trying to go for something cool with the delayed vocals but I guess the amount of work I put into them blinded my judgment. And what do you mean by connect them? Like add more transitions?