Wiz Khalifa - Fly Ni***s Do Fly Things*{FeedBack}

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DjayyFeelgood
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Wiz Khalifa - Fly Ni***s Do Fly Things*{FeedBack}

Post by DjayyFeelgood » Thu Jun 16, 2011 10:10 pm

Comment and enjoy :D feedback would be cool


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Re: Wiz Khalifa - Fly Ni***s Do Fly Things*{FeedBack}

Post by DjayyFeelgood » Sat Jun 18, 2011 5:22 am

Bumpp feedback back please :D

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Re: Wiz Khalifa - Fly Ni***s Do Fly Things*{FeedBack}

Post by Nealge » Sat Jun 18, 2011 6:04 am

For all intensive purposes, the first song is done! But there's some things I think could make it better. Change it up a bit. At the second drop, get some note variation in the bass or try trading off into different bass sounds. Production's excellent though.

On the second piece, somethings missing from the drop. It seems like there's more space to fill up. I think first and foremost, the bass needs some rhythmic variation. mess with LFO speed and wave shape as the song progresses and it'll instantly get better.

Overall, good job bro
Soundcloud Sequencer drenched, hefty 80's synth leads, and two drops in the same tune! What a bargain!
Soundcloud Proggy melody, up-tempo Drumstepish style, over the top drums, and some unintentional bars of 2/4 thrown in for good measure.

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