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14 Year old producer.. [DNB] Track.. 7789 - Hell

Post by MrAural » Fri Jun 24, 2011 1:54 am

Did that because I am a troll...

Nevertheless... Heres the track.

Constructive criticsm welcome!

Soundcloud

Wait a while whilst soundcloud fixes an issue..
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Re: 14 Year old producer.. [DNB] Track.. 7789 - Hell

Post by DJNARKUS » Fri Jun 24, 2011 2:04 am

holy shit i just freaked out cause i saw the title.
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Re: 14 Year old producer.. [DNB] Track.. 7789 - Hell

Post by MrAural » Fri Jun 24, 2011 2:16 am

Found the problem.. Re-rendering it.
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Re: 14 Year old producer.. [DNB] Track.. 7789 - Hell

Post by MrAural » Fri Jun 24, 2011 2:22 am

FIXED.
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Re: 14 Year old producer.. [DNB] Track.. 7789 - Hell

Post by MrAural » Fri Jun 24, 2011 2:23 am

Maybe not. Click the link on soundcloud. Should work fine.
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Re: 14 Year old producer.. [DNB] Track.. 7789 - Hell

Post by MrAural » Fri Jun 24, 2011 2:31 am

Soundcloud
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Re: 14 Year old producer.. [DNB] Track.. 7789 - Hell

Post by MrAural » Fri Jun 24, 2011 2:31 am

Working now...
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Re: 14 Year old producer.. [DNB] Track.. 7789 - Hell

Post by MrAural » Fri Jun 24, 2011 3:23 am

Hmm. updated.
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Re: 14 Year old producer.. [DNB] Track.. 7789 - Hell

Post by DJNARKUS » Fri Jun 24, 2011 4:25 am

Sounds decent needs more low end. check out mine http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=205379
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Re: 14 Year old producer.. [DNB] Track.. 7789 - Hell

Post by MrAural » Fri Jun 24, 2011 10:37 am

DJNARKUS wrote:Sounds decent needs more low end. check out mine http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=205379
What do you mean "low end" sorry. I dont know what half things what people are saying are, I'm ask wub for advice when I need it.
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Re: 14 Year old producer.. [DNB] Track.. 7789 - Hell

Post by Code-M » Fri Jun 24, 2011 12:48 pm

the synth sounds good but, i think the melody is abit too all over the shop, it sounds as if it is literally just the beat and the synth and seems a little flat, if you made a new dnb beat to match that synth and developed the song more it would sound great. Maybe sidechaining/making the synth oscillate would make it sound less irritating idk because atm it sounds like you've been punching random keys on the keyboard, doesnt sound like youve used one scale.
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Re: 14 Year old producer.. [DNB] Track.. 7789 - Hell

Post by submatiks » Fri Jun 24, 2011 1:01 pm

MrAural wrote:
DJNARKUS wrote:Sounds decent needs more low end. check out mine http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=205379
What do you mean "low end" sorry. I dont know what half things what people are saying are,
i dont know if your jokin or not but if you dont know what he means by low end i think you should seriously read some stuff on music prod. not a bad tune. i would try layering the snare and had some reverb to the hi hats and snare. and add in some pads or some little high notes.
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Re: 14 Year old producer.. [DNB] Track.. 7789 - Hell

Post by MrAural » Fri Jun 24, 2011 1:28 pm

Alright. I was not joking. It was serious. I just learnt that it was "Sub Bass" from Wub.
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Re: 14 Year old producer.. [DNB] Track.. 7789 - Hell

Post by MrAural » Fri Jun 24, 2011 1:52 pm

Soundcloud]

Updated. Used Soundgoodizer to improve sound, and made the sub-bass louder.
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