My first DUBSTEP song.

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pgcampbell
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My first DUBSTEP song.

Post by pgcampbell » Sun Jun 26, 2011 2:27 pm

please check it out and leave a comment of what you think and remember to thumbs up.

thanks.
it's my first go, leave suggestions for my next song.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CjTdGEVC ... ideo_title

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Re: My first DUBSTEP song.

Post by XskittyX » Sun Jun 26, 2011 6:05 pm

It NEEDS subbass, not sure if there's none because the audio quality is shit or whatever. Convert it, upload it to soundcloud bro. Try mixing the drums up a little, felt a little same-y all the way through, not enough to change to keep someone hooked.
http://www.mixcloud.com/Regret/dubstep-forum-mix/ First ever mix. Made from free tracks in the feedback forum. Is your track in there?

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Re: My first DUBSTEP song.

Post by Lectric » Sun Jun 26, 2011 8:13 pm

sweetbabyjesus :alpaca:

k in all honesty there are a few things wrong here off the bat:
the DAW you are working in is horrible if you really want to flex your creativity and crank out a good tune.
there wasnt anything that was actually dubstep about the song.
the only people that like vulgar movie clips in their songs are scene girls and 15 yr old boys.
no sub bass.
no sub bass.
goodgodwhywastherenosubbass.
also the drums really do not reflect the dubstep genre and they get very monotonous and boring.

i know i sound like a tnuc but its the truth. and im just tryina steer you on the right path.
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Ayatollah
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Re: My first DUBSTEP song.

Post by Ayatollah » Sun Jun 26, 2011 9:08 pm

is this a troll?

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Re: My first DUBSTEP song.

Post by Big Freq » Mon Jun 27, 2011 12:37 am

LMAO

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Re: My first DUBSTEP song.

Post by Dak0 » Mon Jun 27, 2011 2:15 am

Ayatollah wrote:is this a troll?

i hope so XD

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Re: My first DUBSTEP song.

Post by pgcampbell » Mon Jun 27, 2011 12:17 pm

Ok, i have taken your advice homies, and produced two more songs for the upcoming release of my long-awaited EP.

Hope you can check them out


High and Low (With Lyrics) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gzGJi2b3 ... er&list=UL

which one? Instrumental or Lyrics?

High and Low (Instrumental) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mauj3eZ_ ... er&list=UL

BASS (Demo) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4MrVT53Uyyo

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Re: My first DUBSTEP song.

Post by pgcampbell » Mon Jun 27, 2011 12:18 pm

Lectric wrote:sweetbabyjesus :alpaca:

k in all honesty there are a few things wrong here off the bat:
the DAW you are working in is horrible if you really want to flex your creativity and crank out a good tune.
there wasnt anything that was actually dubstep about the song.
the only people that like vulgar movie clips in their songs are scene girls and 15 yr old boys.
no sub bass.
no sub bass.
goodgodwhywastherenosubbass.
also the drums really do not reflect the dubstep genre and they get very monotonous and boring.

i know i sound like a tnuc but its the truth. and im just tryina steer you on the right path.

what DAW should i use - links please.

see if the 3 new songs are better

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Ayatollah
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Re: My first DUBSTEP song.

Post by Ayatollah » Mon Jun 27, 2011 1:35 pm

you blew it now man... way too obvious

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Lectric
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Re: My first DUBSTEP song.

Post by Lectric » Mon Jun 27, 2011 2:20 pm

pgcampbell wrote:
Lectric wrote:sweetbabyjesus :alpaca:

k in all honesty there are a few things wrong here off the bat:
the DAW you are working in is horrible if you really want to flex your creativity and crank out a good tune.
there wasnt anything that was actually dubstep about the song.
the only people that like vulgar movie clips in their songs are scene girls and 15 yr old boys.
no sub bass.
no sub bass.
goodgodwhywastherenosubbass.
also the drums really do not reflect the dubstep genre and they get very monotonous and boring.

i know i sound like a tnuc but its the truth. and im just tryina steer you on the right path.

what DAW should i use - links please.

see if the 3 new songs are better
3 NEW SONGS???? its been less than 24 hours!
:sinkingship:
good god there is no way this isnt a troll....
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Re: My first DUBSTEP song.

Post by SignalRecon » Mon Jun 27, 2011 2:49 pm

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Re: My first DUBSTEP song.

Post by XskittyX » Mon Jun 27, 2011 4:22 pm

DUBTurbo - it'll make you produce SICK and PRO beats within minutes. Chicks? No Problem!
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